Chapter 1: This was really amazing. It depicts real life in a way. everyone is so busy, just running towards a future. No one ever takes the time to slow down for love anymore. I know the title talks about Chen and his tears but that was the part which got me the most.
Chapter 1: This is really cute~ a very nice monologue!
If you break it up into paragraphs, I'm sure you would get more comments/upvotes! There are a few distinguishable topic changes that call for a new paragraph. When all the sentences run together without a break it can be very hard on the eyes.
Chapter 1: oh my gooood!!!! this is just so bitter sweet ;____; i wonder why this story is not gaining much attention because surely, this is such a good piece of work TT.TT you really did a good job writing there and potrayed sweet jongdae very well! seriously, you're really talented :) you should write more suchen :D
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