Mirotic

Description

The boys of DBSK are known for jumping between Korea and Japan to satisfy their eager and supportive fans that cheer for them through thick and thin, rain, hail or shine. So their recent trip over to Japan hasn't raised any eyebrows but merely excitement for the upcoming photobook. With early news of a possible Korean comeback in September of 2008 the fans are doubly excited except....the boys have been given the responsibility to come up with the concept but the beauties of Japan aren't giving them any chance to think about an album.

One night however, curiousity gets the better of Changmin who becomes determined to explore a maze that lies just behind their hotel despite his manager's rules to stay indoors. Accompanied at first by Jaejoong....and gradually the rest of the members who can't help but join in, the five enter the maze only to find that troubles, surprises and ultimately danger await. But what could go so wrong in a harmless maze? Are the threats real or merely imagined? Most important of all, will the boys ever think of that album concept?

Foreword

 

Okay well this is my first time writing a fanfic here, I have got many other stories that I have written but they have been for other sites. I suppose if I get enough readers I'll be nice enough to put them up as well. So here you have it, the first chapter of Mirotic.

Original title isn't it? But don't be fooled by it, I've only called it 'Mirotic' because of how the story is set out and the basic fact that it's set in the lead up to the album's release. In a way, it could be how the album came about....nahh, you all know better than that, but we can dream can't we? ^.~ 

Anyway, this story has all five DBSK boys in it, I couldn't help but turn back time and include them all. It's also a mix between the Mirotic MV (who doesn't love that piece of godly goodness?) and I think the....2nd episode of Banjun Theatre (that is the one where Changmin and Junsu get lost yes? I apologise, I haven't watched it for a while). So hopefully this is pretty interesting and slightly, possibly, maybe twisted? Well, you can see for yourself.

Hopefully you enjoy it, I apologize if this first chapter is a little bit confusing or the writing style isn’t quite right, but I’m just getting the feel for the story. I promise that it will get much more interesting as it goes on..There’s a whole big twist...and troubles...and...Oops no spoilers! 

Please enjoy!

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ningagirl #1
Why are you not updating????it will be nice if you update,,,,please
DbSkHatter
#2
Chapter 7: i hate you =3=
seohinnie #3
This is just DAEBAK! :D
Update soon! author-nim ;)
Can't wait! ^^
DbSkHatter
#4
Chapter 6: I THOUGHT THIS WAS AN UPDATE! I HATE CHUUUUUUUUUU
cassiopcassie #5
MIROTIC!!!!!!!! i love it very muuuuuuuch.. =)))))))
itsRaeG #6
love the portrayal of the music video! update soon please!
DbSkHatter
#7
queue duff duff intro! >:D<br />
MAKNAE BE ! ~~~~~<br />
LOL you made my day xDDD<br />
btw....Lit was a ...that is all LOL
KuRo_NeKo_DeSu
#8
Wow.... AWESOME STORY~~ Love it~~ kinda wanna go into the maze... and meet the lady.. Somehow this reminds of the grudge... And u've portrayed the scenes from the MV well XD
EvilLittleMaknaes #9
Hehe thx I get that a lot :P there ARE a lot of evil maknaes haha. Lolz after reading this imma google dbsk sum more XD and the friend that told me about this is ----> Mariam-chu :p I think u already replied 2 her? XD anyways, this was a great update as always haha :p ugh i need 2 update my fic too I havent updated in months.... Tho my fix sus XD I need 2 padre soon..... Im such a procrasinator,,,, =.= i spelt it wrong didnt i? <br />
but sum times I feel like pushing the Eun Ra character off a bridge .... But then again there wouldn't be a storie without her haha.... <br />
I use too many 'haha's and 'Lol's XD :P.... And smilies -.- <br />
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:P long comment isn't it? I'll stop now.....<br />