i hate html did i tell you guys that (this is user narcosis the only sole reason why this layout is swole). okay this is so sketch but i'm sorry i am not sorry what????????

absence: first of all, thanks for applying kimmy! seukhye is a really good ulzzang for yoona, because she has the 'visual' look like yoona. but, the gallery you linked us too didn't have any hq pictures? but it's fine, seukhye is a popular ulzzang so we'll find a lot of hq pics of her. moving on to her basics and personality. you forgot to put her age, but that's fine. she's 19, right? she's a bit underweight, but i can relate to that because is used to be that height and weight too. it'll also be useful for rumors, like those, "snsd has a strict diet" ones. i can already imagine some scenes with her personality c: especially with her gullible, and choding like personality. i'd imagine a tough person to not be so, childish, but maybe the word you can use for haerin is stubborn. i didn't really understand your background. her father died, but you said she was an orphan. and you said her mother moved back to korea. so, her mother abandoned haerin, am i correct? and her family now, they adopted her, right? i'd like for you to elaborate more on her background. how she got adopted, moved to korea, why her family lived in japan. g.na is a really good person to choose as a mentor, so good job on that~ and the fan hate you described was kinda intense, but that's good! we always need some drama in this story ^ ^ 

overall your app was a fun read. i didn't hate anything, really. but you got rejected because i want you to elaborate on her background, so it wouldn't confuse us, especially if we write about it in the story. thanks for applying! 

absence: hey jasmine! thanks for applying, kang sura is such a pretty ulzzang, i can't really critique your choice on that ~ one question, does she have an eyesmile? it doesn't really matter if she doesn't, because that would be fun to write how people get disappointed with the lack of eye-smiles. i loved her personality, but i'm brain-dead, so i can't write much about the stuff i liked and such. /sorry/  i love how you put that she dislikes insects. ~ * i am seeing the inner tiffany in jinsoo * ~  her background would be very interesting to write with, i'm kinda going for that jaejoong-like outcome, if you know what i mean. (once he got famous his biological parents spoke out etcetc, and people accused them for leeching on his fame). moving on, youngjae is a good choice for a mentor (i love his voice omg), and everything else on your app was really fun to read. you didn't confuse me or anyhting, so good job on your app! thanks or applying c: 

absence: ah, another yoona applicant~ hi michelle! thanks for applying c: first of all, i don't really understand how she can speak filipino/tagalog? you didn't write that she lived in the philippines, is part filipino or anything like that, so i think you should take it off. its just really random. a full korean living in america and speaking filipino is just, random. i love how she's clumsy, and so refreshing unlike yoona who's really graceful and literally perfect. it'd be really cool to write scenes about jihye's clumsiness. ie. jihye falling while trying to do the hiphop parts in 'igab' and her background, without knowing one parent, is like yoona's. and its a  sob story, but it isn't bogus. i like how hyoyeon herself is jihye's mentor. and how she told jihye to audition. if you're chosen, it would be fun to make hyoyeon as the 'peacemaker' between the old and new snsd ~ ^ ^ and your scene request c: maybe yoona and hyo can both become the peacemakers between the two sides. it kinda reminds me of how takamina thinks that kanata would become a great successor. (you're an akb0048 fan, so you'd know what i'm talking about)!

your app was a good read overall, and i wouldn't want you to change anything except for one thing. delete the fact that she speaks filipino, unless you'd want to explain how she learned the language. but, thanks for applying michelle c: 

narcosis: yeee okay, no but seriously thank you for applying ram! just by the fact that you picked hyoyeon i'm just, it made me happy because i wasn't expecting a hyoyeon applicant to be honest aha. ulzzang first, i personally love park sora and even if she's overuse; who cares, park sora is perfection. i noticed that you forgot to delete on of the brackets, but its nothing dramatic so next off, i would like to point out that there were some grammar mistakes, but if english isn't your first language, then it'll be alright because the english language is really annoying to me too LOL. i noticed chaeun to be sort of the snobby ice princess who thinks she's perfect but i mean, we aren't expecting the characters to be exactly like the original snsd members so more drama we can make out of it!!!!^^ your background doesn't state why or how her hometown came to be london? it was rather short and i'm not getting a very nice vibe from chaeun at this point. she sounds extremely spoiled and bratty or maybe that's just me kldsajgljg. if you can fix that up then that'll be great!

and she's pretty tall like, really tall because that's 5'9 but her bmi is perfect so there's nothing wrong with her weight. overall, i did enjoy it even if some parts were rather short. you chose to have a love interest and i found it rather cheesy...a bit cliche yes so if you're willing to change those, we will accept you. o/

absence: hi ri, thanks for applying! it surprised me that the ulzzang you chose was jin jaeyoung, i didn't know she cut her hair! i love how she's the child of tablo, he's so talented. and since she grew up with a musical background, she could be the one showing the girls how the industry works and such. i really liked her personality, but i don't have anything to critique on it, so don't think i disliked it! and when you put 'ramune' you meant to say fizzy instead of rizzy, right? i realized that tablo's daughter is actually named haru and i love how you stayed true to her birthday and such. (but irl haru's bday is on may 2nd, not 20th. not a big problem though). jinae being a pretty harsh journalist would be pretty fun to write about. she can write articles about the new snsd's scandals and such. nice idea! 

i loved her interview, and her love interest part wasn't cliche. for your scene requests, i get what you mean ^ ^ and haru can even compose remixes and revamps of snsd songs, thanks for giving the idea aha. thanks for applying, i loved your app! 

narcosis: thank you so much for applying and i would personally say hanyoung sounds really nice and cute and sdlkajglkj i actually like people like that like no overly hyperactive but you know LOL. i like how she's you know ~*~all happy~*~ but there is more than what meets the eye and stuff if you know what i mean. the ulzzang was okay and the fact that you made kangta your idol relative omfg crying at life because kangta is perf and his voice is perf dlksajglkjf. okay, i know this review is very short and that it is also okay that you were born in incheon and kangta wasn't because he's just your uncle and his "sibling" could have left seoul and went to incheon to get married so i understnd that!!!!! but overall, though the background is quite short and that you're another one of the many yoona appliers, i think there's really nothing wrong with your app! c: 

narcosis: yes finally someone chosen yuri! and omfg, even if we don't want anymore idol relatives that are from snsd, its alright and you do not have to change it! okay, i see what you did there with the yuni and yuri ha ha omfg okay yeah. and that you've chosen kwon sujeong (rumored to be yuri's cousin) as an ulzzang like i see you. omfg but honestly, okay the personality, i usually dont see someone 4D as "smart" or violent and i feel as if they're a bit contradicting i was wondering how she knew japanese? did she learn it in school or? yuni's mother's name though, its so beautiful omfg. and ok i know i'm just rambling here but if you don't mind changing up your personality (since being '4d' is a bit overused) just a bit and maybe adding why she knows japanese and i'll be gladly to accept you!

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absence: hey lia, thanks for applying~ its okay, you didn't have to choose an ulzzang that looked like sunny! and yeojung is 19, not 20 ^ ^ omg when you wrote about her disinfecting the floor, it made me crack up. she gives me the 'energy pill' vibe, like sunny! at first i was confused on how she knew chinese and such, but thanks for explaining it in the background! i got confused, her brother sees her as an aunt? LOL did i read that right, or did you forget to put sister. her haters are harsh, ouch. but hate is always good for this story! overall, your app was a fun read, thanks for applying! one question, what's a GGTs? (look at your scene request). 

absence: hey ky, thanks for applying. first of all, her personality was REALly confusing to read. i can understand if english isn't your first language, but her personality was all over the place. you talked about how its okay if you tell her secrets, and then you talk about her getting scared about seeing a ghost. it doesn't flow. you wrote how she's a party animal and her brother dislikes her, and how its "in her blood". that did not make sense at all. none of her family members have that "party animal", outgoing personalities. her personality was poorly written, and it didn't flow at all. and i got so confused while reading it. please fix it, and we'll accept you.

absence: first of all, you fuq'd up on the layout. there were some parts in arial, and you didn't delete some brackets, and you didn't hyperlink. the pictures were also disorganized and misplaced. you could've searched it up on aff or any other website on how to hyperlink. and its really simple. first, type something up. then, you highlight that, and click the globe/earth icon with the gray thing around it. then you paste your link, and that's it. this is a tutorial on how to hyperlink. you didn't put her age, and the fact that she spoke english is a bit unrealistic to be quite honest. and did she learn dancing in one year's time? her background was just really confusing, and most of it belonged in the trainee history tbqh. i know this is your first app, but please fix your app! we'll accept it if you do, thank you! ^ ^ 

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