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Prophecy of the Clash

 

Review:

Prophecy of the Clash

 

01. Story Title {4/5}

The title seems to fit well with the story, and I find it pretty interesting too.

02. Story Forward {7/10}
It made me interested in reading it, but I think some more information would have made it better. Maybe some information about the characters.

03. Plot {15/30}
Since there are not many chapters it's hard to really give a high score for this. I am a bit confused with the characters. The story is interesting but I think I need to read more to get a better understand of what it's all about.

04. Characters {8/15}
I don't really know who the characters are, it seems they will be reveled in more chapters. They seem interesting but want to know more about them.

05. Originality {20/20}
This story seems very original. I have not read a story quite like it before.

06. Flow {5/10}
The story is a bit hard to follow sometimes, and can be confusing but it is still pretty good. Once again hard to give a high score with only a few chapters to base it on.

07. Grammar, Spelling, Punctuation Marks, ect. {17/20}
I found some mistakes but not really major.

Overall: 76/110

 

Review by: BigBangVIP4Life

 

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Thank you for the honest review! I will go correct all my minor mistakes! XD

 

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110infinity #1
Chapter 6: please update author 🙏
Yeoliipop #2
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Dreamer_KatieM #7
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Ace_of_Butterfly #8
It's an amazing story from the forword and I am sure that every single info from the description has a mysteryous, fantastic meaning....But plz forgive me cuz I don't have time to read it now...thank you so much and I want to give you special compliments for the title and caracters....
Tinywings #9
Chapter 1: Hello~ I promised you I would check out your writing, so here I am~ :p Prepare yourself for a mean comment from me, whuahahaha!

First of all, since I only read the prologue, I want to give you my opinion about the story plot thus far :) My first impression of this story is that it contains quite a lot of information, new information for this story I would have to elaborate before continuing. I'd recommend you to describe more clearly these kinds of informaiton in the future, for it will help in making it all clear to the reader. Otherwise, readers mind get confused and stop reading all together, and that would be a pity. So, do pay attention that you don't make your story plot too difficult! :) I've seen a lot of writers wanting to make some big, grandiose storyplot, and get lost in it in the end. That would be a pity :'<. HOWEVER, as far as I can get it form the prologue, your writing is consistent, pleasant to read, and doesn't make me want to click the exit-button, which can only mean that your writing is decently good ;) Very interesting plot you have here, hope it will work out well! Good luck with it!
BigBangVIP4Life #10
Chapter 6: wow this chapter was COOL!!!!=)
yay now i know who they are!!
looking forward to the next update.:}
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