When Your Heart Stopped Beating [One Shot]

Description

A short story of how life chose to come between the love of two people. 

How does it end for Kim Jae joong?

"Yoochun-ah, you broke my heart the moment yours stopped beating."

Foreword

 I know I'm not finished yet with my other story (Written in a song) but this just popped into my head and I REALLY HAVE TO WRITE IT! or else i'll be really saaaad! I was originally thinking of inserting this one in Written in a Song but I have no idea where it could lead the story so.... ^^,

I know it's a little bit cheezy but I really hope you'll like it! I just LOVE Jaechun soo much! (Well I'm just starting to like it ^^)

And btw, this is also my first time writing in the Present tense... I always use the Past so its really kinda hard! I'm sorry for any wrong grammars. ^^ You can always leave a comment if something's wrong, you know.. so i can change it. :) THANKS.

THANKS SO MUCH FOR READING! Have fun!

Please do leave comments! I really appreciate generous comments! <3

Comments

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Claudine_21 #1
Chapter 1: omg this is sooo sad you made me cry!!!! anw i liked the story hahah i feel like such a sadist..i'll be in a corner crying if you wanna find me
minnie6002
#2
Chapter 1: i'm crying like hell now so touching thank you T.T
imcassielf #3
beautiful TT
Sarapyon #4
T_T Jaechun T^T
ErrorVirus12
#5
Awww.. that was sad.. =/
Emperor_Kyungsoo
#6
That's sad..... *pouts*
Miss-Yora #7
Thanks guys! appreciate all comments! :*
CodeNameSarang #8
TT^TT<br />
JaeJoong is heartbroken... TT^TT<br />
This story is awesome~~~~
CrazyNaru
#9
"Yoochun dies the next day."<br />
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Aw hell naw!! XD<br />
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Wrote moar~ :P<br />