Alter Ego Secrets

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Would you rather listen to your alter ego or you? 
 
Your alter ego is just another part of you.
 
Would you rather listen to your love or your heart?
 
Are they both the same thing?
 
Did you remember to put on make-up and paint on your facade?  
 
 
they hide truth.
they hide emotions.
THEY HIDE YOU.  

Foreword

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Formally Knows as MakeUp Little Secrets. 

 

 

Your alter ego, and you.

whO would you rather win---which truth?

Which would you rather win truth?

 

 

 

Alter Ego Secrets

-Originally known as MakeUP little secrets

-Started 20th Jan 2013

-Ended 26th Jan 2013

Word Count: 1723 words

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babyda91
#1
Chapter 1: Oh..but to be honest i luv Chaerin not CL
babyyydino
#2
Chapter 1: it's 2015 and i re-read this story hoping for a sequel:(
babyyydino
#3
Sequeal please!!!
Hariti #4
Chapter 1: OMGGG sequel! Aish, This can NOT be real!!
mbubbly #5
Chapter 1: This is wonderful! It's difficult on Chaerin. Minus the fact i had to read Daragon moments here, Skydragon encounters made me happy. Although it was in a secrecy. Awww my poor skydragon. If there wasn't any CL, Chaerin would have probably lost everything.
heartbreakergirl #6
Chapter 1: Woww! I liked!
Even though this one shot is excellent! It would be very cool to read a sequel, since i wonder how Chaerin will deal with all this situation. It seems that CL could handle it well, but Chae?

Btw, lucky on the contest!^^
chocolatefrosty
#7
Chapter 1: Omg ouch ouch ouch my skydragon heart ):
This is so well-written. Amazing! :D
CL is strong... but definitely not Chaerin. ):
AND YES I DEMAND A SEQUEL, DEFINITELY. :D
poisjo
#8
Chapter 1: This is a tiring and painful love. I normally don’t like the third party and especially if they cheating on their friend, best friend boyfriend. But I can’t hate the third party here because she is Chaerin.
How can they be happy in this relationship? Chaerin is full of guilt and I think CL is sort of shameless? I don’t know the right word for it. This type of relationship will become really ugly when it was found out and not handled properly.
Yes, I want a sequel! Make it turn out well please. ^^
merna8 #9
Chapter 1: Very well written :) I totally loved it, I am not sure if it needs a sequel, I like the end as it is but you are the writter and you know better :)