2nd Decree - Festivities and Accidents

Spending an Eternity in the Medieval Era

 

Up in the princess’s quarters on the second floor of the palace paper was flying about. The crown princess of Eterna was frantically trying to finish all her paperwork before the festival this evening. The endless stacks of papers on her desk were mocking her. Seriously, how come her father gets to go to the festival regardless of how much paperwork he finishes and, she can’t? Life was truly unfair. Because of her father’s unjust ultimatum she has been working nonstop for the past three days in order to finish in time.

Princess Hyorin smiled happily as she just signed her last petition form. She stretched her arms delicately and giggled. ‘Done at last!’ Thought Hyorin happily. She quickly summoned her maids to take the atrocious paperwork away. As they were slowly piling all the paperwork off her desk, floor, bed…etc the princess was deciding what her commoner outfit would be for the evening.

There were so many possibilities! Since it was the annual festival of Eterna everybody was going to dress up. That means the princess can finally go in her average everyday clothes because honestly always dressing up as a ‘commoner’ can get pretty tiring. ‘I could wear the pink gown I had tailored several months ago. Technically I never wore it outside, but what about the yellow dress I bought with Hyunjae two weeks ago? Jaestar said I looked amazing, so I had to buy it. Oh the decisions…’

Just as she was about to make a choice the newly hired made timidly tapped her on the shoulder. “Um…Princess Hyorin we cleared out all the finished documents in your room. You may resume working your majesty.”

Hyorin looked at the young maid in a confused manner. ‘Continue working? What is this madness?’. In her politest tone of voice she inquired. “Continue with what?” The young maid in response to the princess’s inquiry sidestepped to reveal several stacks of fresh paperwork being delivered to her room. Hyorin gaped. “What is this?!”

The maid quickly bowed her head respectfully. “The king sent you several files. He says since he is very busy with the upcoming council meetings he can’t properly tend to them. He request you look over them.”

“Daddy…why?!” Princess Hyorin glared at the accumulating stacks of paper hoping that the intensity of her glare would cause the papers to spontaneously combust. “You know what? I technically finished my paperwork on time. I am going to get ready for the festival. Tell daddy I will look over it later.”

“B-but your highness, the King specifically said…”

“That I am allowed to go to the festival if I get my paperwork done, which I did.” The princess skipped towards her closet gleefully. “Today is a day to have fun. Actually, why don’t you take the rest of the day off and enjoy the festival?” Hyorin proceeded to quickly grab the dress she decided upon earlier and sprinted off to the bathroom.

The stunned maid blinked in bewilderment. The princess was indeed unstoppable.

-

Over at Councilman Oh’s study Sehun and Yixing were diligently working on the proposal. Sehun was piously taking down notes whereas Yixing was scaling the elevated bookshelves in search of material that maybe useful for the proposal.

 “Yixing hyung, can you locate the list of Eterna’s exportable commodities? I need that in order to begin section seven.” Asked Sehun tiredly. Honestly Sehun wanted nothing more than to collapse in his luxurious king sized bed. He has been so focused on re-writing the proposal that he has barely been sleeping, never the less eating normally.

The same goes for Yixing. Yixing’s primary job is to help Sehun on the proposal. As Councilman Oh’s most trusted scholar he was expected to know pretty much everything pertaining to international relations. Councilman Oh asked him to be Sehun’s man of reference. After climbing up and down various bookshelves Yixing brought back an assortment of books on the Economy of Eterna. “Your father has yet to get the updated list. I memorized it though. It should be arriving before the council meeting so I will just list it for you now so you can finish this section. You can attach it afterwards.”

Sehun smiled at his hyung. “Thanks Yixing hyung. You are a lifesaver.”

Yixing laughed. “What am I here for?” He pulled out a chair and took a seat directly in front of Sehun. “I finished section eight, nine, and ten. So after this section we should be done.”

Sehun gaped in amazement. “When did you finish?”

“Hm…I finished sometime earlier this morning.”

“Even the maps of the trade routes? That should have taken about three hours by itself!” Exclaimed Sehun.

Yixing sheepishly laughed. “I had spare time?”

“I see why you are my father’s right hand man.” Sehun casually looked out the window. The sun was about to set in a few hours which means that the annual festival should be starting soon. Every year Sehun and Yixing would meet up with their friends and enjoy the festival. This year though, they never thought they would be this busy.

As they were both about to get back to work the doors to the study room burst open revealing a rather chipper Kim Jongin. Jongin then proceeded to march over towards the two bookworms and placed a dainty basket filled with sandwiches and pastries between the two.

“Joonmyun hyung told me to deliver these to you guys since he figured you two haven’t eaten yet. He also told me to tell you to hurry up and get ready for the festival. He will meet us near the knight’s performing plaza. They are picking the new knight this year for the mentorship and hyung figures you wanted to watch, right Yixing hyung?”

Yixing looked at Jongin eagerly, “When does it start?”

“Yixing hyung!” Whined Sehun, “You can’t leave me now, we need to finish section seven.”

“Oh no worries Sehun.” Chirped Jongin as he swung his arm around Sehun’s neck. “You are coming with us.”

“What?!”

“Joonmyun hyung is concerned for your health, and you know how he gets. Going out to have fun won’t kill you, that and I am supposed to have both of you delivered to him dressed properly, fed, and on time. SO LET’S GET A MOVE ON PEOPLE!” Jongin then proceeded to stuff a sandwich in both Sehun and Yixing’s mouth and dragged them outside of the study to freshen up prior to forcing them to go to the festival.

-

Meanwhile outside the Jung residence stood the physician’s daughter, Han Saehyun all suited up and ready to attend the festival. She was standing outside admiring the comfortable abode in which her friend lived. Sure it wasn’t a very big house, but whenever she walked by or decided to visit there was always a feeling of warmth radiating from the house. It didn’t matter what time of day it was there was always someone there, someone to come home to.

Unlike their cozy family home, Saehyun’s house was almost always empty, excluding business hours. Her family only consists of her and her father. Her father, Dr. Han was a world renowned physician specializing in herbal remedies. Unfortunately being world renowned also meant your presence was in high demand. He was often summoned outside of the city for business.

Thinking about this topic made her rather depressed, thus to elude the looming topic she decided to knock on the front door of the Jung household in hopes of seeing her friend and dragging her also to the festival.

“Hyuuuunjaeee! Come on! We are going to be laaaate!” Whined Saehyun unhappily. She heard some movement inside and after about a minute of waiting Hyunjae opened the door. She was also dressed nicely for the festival, but rather than dressed as a girl she was dressed as a boy. Her boyish maroon tailcoat and her black hat fit her nicely.

“…Should I even ask why you have fancy boy clothes?”

“In my defense these were Youngjae’s several years ago. I did not go out of my way to buy it.” Replied Hyunjae curtly.

Saehyun tilted her head in curiosity. “Why are you even dressed as a boy?”

Hyunjae gestured to her parcel. “I promised to have all of Shakespere’s sonnets done from some nobleman sometime this week. I finished early and we agreed to meet up during the festival.”

“Oh I see. By the way, where is Youngjae? Isn’t Youngjae coming with us this year?” inquired Saehyun.

“He said he was coming. Let me check.” Rather than walking upstairs and kindly knocking on his door, Hyunjae decided yelling was more effective. “YAH! JUNG YOUNGJAE! ARE YOU READY YET?!” Saehyun wasn’t even fazed by Hyunjae’s odd methods of communicating with her brother. It happened way too many times.

The same thing can be said of Youngjae. Rather than opening the door and kindly replying to his sister he also deicided that yelling was the best course of action. Without even opening the door he yelled, “NOONA! I CAN’T GO! I HAVE A MIDTERM NEXT WEEK. I NEED TO STUDY.”

“YOU SAID THAT LAST WEEK!”

“I FORGOT I HAD ONE THIS WEEK.”

“FINE! MAKE SURE YOU ACE IT. DO YOU WANT ANYTHING FROM THE STALLS?”

“NAH, I AM FINE. TAKE HYUN NOONA AND HAVE FUN!”

Hyunjae quickly buttoned up her coat grabbed Youngjae’s old pair of dress shoes and motioned for Saehyun that she was ready to go. “BYE.” She called out to Youngjae.

“BYE NOONA.”yelled Youngjae from behind his door.

“Bye Youngjae! Study hard!” Chirped Saehyun happily. “Fighting!”

“THANK YOU HYUN NOONA! HAVE FUN! BYE! TAKE C-” And with that Hyunjae promptly shut the door. Smiling, she then proceeded to drag Saehyun towards the bright lights of the festival.

“Hyorin unnie said she was meeting us at the violet fountain right?” questioned Hyunjae.

“…I thought we were meeting at the lavender one.” And thus they started to bicker. The two ladies eventually decided that since Hyunjae needed to meet up with her commissioner at the violet fountain they would go there in hopes that it was the intended meeting place.

Unknown to both of the girls walking down the street, Youngjae who was supposedly ‘studying’ dejectedly sat by his window watching both of the girls walking merrily towards the festival.

-

On the other side of town three good-looking, well-dressed young men were trying to fight the crowd in order to meet up with their other good-looking friend, Kim Joonmyun. They were failing horribly. Despite being youthful, strong young adults they were having great difficulty forcing their way through the mass of vibrantly dressed people.

Jongin who was very adept in weaving through massive crowds of people couldn’t help but be slightly put off with his two companions who were not so adept. At the moment he was watching Yixing apologize to the fourteenth person they bumped into.

“I am so sorry. I didn’t mean to bump into you. I am so sorry.” Yixing bowed his head and apologized repeatedly.

The little boy in whom he was apologizing to looked at him weirdly. Frankly the little kid didn’t know what to do about the frantic nobleman in front of him. “Um…it is okay mister. I wasn’t looking, you don’t have to bow.”

 “Does your head hurt? Do you need to see a doctor?” Insisted a guilt ridden Yixing.

“Uhhh…No thank you mister? I am fine; I just need to find my mom and dad.” The boy really wanted to leave.

“Oh I need to apologize to them too. Would you mind taking me to them?” Upon hearing that the boy was simply terrified, what would his parents think if he they heard he bumped into a stranger that insists he has caused detrimental damage to the boy’s well being, and judging by his festive clothing a nobleman no less.

“Um…I am going to go now.” The boy quickly sprinted towards the crowd of people never to be seen again.

“W-wait!”

“Hyung. Let the boy go. You are scaring him.” Reasoned Sehun.

“What if I caused him permanent brain damage? What if he wanted to become a politian but couldn’t because at an early age he bumped into me and lost valuable brain cells?” Cried Yixing. “I could have ruined his dreams!”

Jongin couldn’t help but point out, “Yixing hyung, I honestly think you are frailer than that kid. He will be fine. He ran into you. You are lucky he didn’t pick pocket you. At this rate we are never going to meet up with Joonmyun hyung.” Sighed Jongin, “Come on lets go.” This time Jongin was determined to make it through the crowd.

Sehun and Yixing nodded and trailed after Jongin diligently to avoid being left behind. Once they re-entered the throng of people the two noblemen realized that Jongin was one hell of a bulldozer. Nothing could stop that boy from plowing his way through the crowd; the sad thing was that he wasn’t even looking back.

After ten minutes of weaving skillfully though the mass of Jongin successfully made it to the Knight’s performing plaza, AND with time to spare. Feeling rather proud of his accomplishment he turned around with his hands up in hopes of hi-fiving his friends. Unfortunately he just realized that while crowd weaving Sehun failed to keep up.

Yixing barely managed to follow Jongin without apologizing to the dozens of people he bumped into. He was panting heavily, hair slightly disheveled. “W-we l-lost Sehun.”

Jongin rubbed his temples and sighed tiredly. “I knew I shouldn’t have let that rich boy go on his own. Yixing hyung and you stay here and wait for Joonmyun hyung? I will go back and find Sehun.” Yixing breathlessly nodded and gestured for Jongin to go on without him. He was still exhausted from the previous crowd weaving endeavor.

On cue Jongin took a deep breath and prepared himself to fight the crowd once again. Trying to find Sehun in a crowd of people was no easy task. It took great skill in order to know what to look for. In other words he proceeded to walking towards the areas of the plaza with the most females. He was bound to find Sehun there.

As he made his way near the violet fountain, since that was where all the ladies were at, he noticed someone wearing something awfully similar to Sehun’s fancy coat. Jongin smirked, he quickly picked up his place in order to get a good running start for when he was going to flatten Sehun for making him late.

What he failed to notice was that there was someone dressed in a red coat in his way. Before he could register the boy properly, he accidentally knocked the kid over, causing him to drop his delicately wrapped parcel.

“Hey! What was that?” Cried the boy unhappily. He quickly bent over and picked up his parcel checking it for damage.

“Sorry kid. I was in a hurry.” Jongin’s eyes were focused on trying to locate Sehun.

“Yah, at least look at people when you are talking to them Kim Jongin.” The scribe boy reprimanded.

“Hey, how do-” Upon closer inspection Jongin realized he just bumped into the same little boy from three days ago. “Oh hey kid. What are you doing out here?”

“I have a package to deliver.” Replied the boy curtly. He was still clearly unhappy about being nearly run over.

Jongin couldn’t help but laugh at the boy’s expression. “Are you trying to be a messenger or something kid? Let me tell you now it is a pretty hard job.”

“Nope. I rather not run around delivering things. I write.”

“So you are telling me a kid like you is a scribe.”

“Stop calling me kid. I am not that young, AND I have a name.” Sassed the scribe boy.

Jongin, who was very amused by the boy’s demands agreed. “Fine then, what’s your name?”

“Jung Youngjae.”

“Well I have to go beat up my friendnow, good to see you again Youngjae.” Jongin smiled and waved.

Being the snarky person he is, Youngjae couldn’t help but add, “I feel bad for your friend. You have an unnatural tendency to squish people. Bye Jongin.”

“HEY THAT IS HYUNG TO YOU!”

-

During the meantime Sehun somehow managed to find his way into a group of overly friendly acquaintances. The group of people consisted from family friends to…people who he has never even met before. Oh how troublesome it is being a nobleman, and the son of a councilman no less. Despite him constantly trying to hint to everyone he needed to go, it only made them more forceful about making him stay.

“Sehun dear, I haven’t seen you in months! How has your mother been darling?” said one of his mother’s friends. Honestly he couldn’t tell them apart anymore.

“Um… she is great. Uh…I am kinda meeting-” but before he could finish he was dragged away by another one of his mother’s many acquaintances.

“Sehunnie. I want you to meet my daughter, you remember the one I told you about?” inquired the other lady happily.

Sehun who was more than uncomfortable at the moment knew there was only one answer to that question. “Oh…uh yeah. I remember Ms. Hwang, I would love to meet her, but I-” But once again before he could finish someone else deicide to drag him away. He had a terrible feeling he was going to be stuck here for a while. He could already see the rest of his evening spiraling downward into a pit of despair and possibly matchmaking sessions. 

Sehun wasn’t the type to be rude to people, but that is what usually gets him stuck into these types of situations. His pride as the son of a respected councilman refuses to let him be disliked by anyone. Well, anyone but Jongin that is.

As he was trying to devise an elaborate means of escaping the mob of family friends he didn’t notice one of Ms. Hwang’s many daughters pulling on his coat causing him to lose his balance, thus accidentally forcing him to collide with a young woman in a very extravagant yellow evening gown. Before even looking at the girl, Sehun quickly turned around and offered his hand. With is most charming smile he apologized, “I am sorry for bumping into you like that.”

What he didn’t noticed until after he bothered taking a look at her face was that she was absolutely beautiful. Her silky brown hair was tied up into an elegant updo, and her lovely pale skin was highlighted by her yellow gown. Judging by the looks of her gown she was clearly of noble class. Sehun couldn’t even remember when he last saw someone this beautiful. Now that he thinks about it…he has never seen this girl before, and that is saying something considering how many girls accost him on a daily basis.

The young girl who was previously knocked down stared at his hand for several seconds before deciding that rather than taking his hand, she would help herself up. She started to dust her gown with a frown on her face. Her yellow dress was soiled! Clearly displeased, she gave Sehun a resentful glare and continued walking as if nothing happened.

Sehun, seeing that this could possibly be a way for him to leave his ‘acquaintances’, called out to the girl, and he began to swiftly jog in order to catch up with her. Well that and he couldn’t let a girl like that leave without getting at least a name right?

The girl in yellow turned around clearly displeased at him trying to be so familiar with her. She obviously was in a rush. Once Sehun caught up to her he tried his best to redeem himself. “Sorry, about earlier. I really didn’t mean to ruin your dress. If you have time would you let me make it up to you?” He was supposed to meet up with his friends, but surely they will understand. Nobody has ever caught his attention like she did. Heck he never actually asked someone out until now.

“It is fine it is just a dress.” She shrugged. “Now if you excuse me I am late meeting up with my friends.”

As she was about to leave he quickly grabbed her hand. “At least let me know you name, so I can make it up to you another time.”

Thinking nothing of it, she agreed. “My friends call me Rin.” And with that she pulled up the hem of her gown and made a mad dash toward the violet fountain to meet her friends leaving Sehun stunned.

As Sehun was standing in the middle of the plaza in a stupor, he was easily put into a headlock by the one and only Kim Jongin. “Hitting on girls are we? Do you have any idea how long I was looking for you? Come on we are late.” Jongin proceed to drag Sehun along by his head all the way to the agreed meeting spot.

“Hyung let go!”

“No. This is what you get for disregarding Bro Code.”

-

At this time the knight’s title competition was commencing. All the knights far and wide gathered into the plaza, each waiting for a chance to prove themselves. This year one lucky knight would be able to win the mentorship from, Lee Aejung, the legendary Lady Knight of Eterna. The judges of the competition would be Aejung, Dongmin, and Woobin repectively.

“I can’t believe there is so much paperwork involved in the judging process!” Cried Aejung in despair. “Can’t I just pick my favorite one to be my mentee?”

Woobin who was sorting out the last stack of semi-finalists turned his attention towards Aejung. He was very amused at her childish expression. “Hey, don’t be like that. The overall goal is to promote knights-in-training to knights. The mentorship is only considered a bonus.” In response to Woobin’s answer Aejung pouted unhappily.

“And besides!” inserted Dongmin, “We have to pick the most skilled knight out of the current knights to become your mentee. If we were to pick our favorites…you wouldn’t be here right now.” Aejung looked absolutely appalled.

Before she had a chance to attack Dongmin for his rude comment, Woobin swiftly smacked Dongmin’s head with the stack of papers he had earlier. “Take these to the awards committee for approval.” On cue Dongmin saluted jokingly towards his brother and took off.

“He is such a jerk!” fumed Aejung unhappily. She crossed her arms and leaned back in her chair with a frown on her face.

Woobin laughed. “Actually it was Dongmin who was adamant on having you as his mentee. He wanted you to be his mentee before the competition started.”

“Really?”questioned Aejung.

“Yeah, he decided that when you guys were all line up for registration.” Recalled Woobin. “He even had your title all planned out.”

“Wait…he gave me the title Lady Knight?”

“Oh no, we played rock paper scissors to see who got to name you. I won.” Laughed Woobin. “I figured that if he gave you your title you would hate him immediately.”

“…What did he want to name me?”

“Aejung the Annihilator.”

“You are right. I would hate him.”

-

Off to the side of the stage Yixing and Joonmyun were happily watching the title competition. It was amazing. Every knight participating in the competition was extremely skilled. Archery, Jousting, Swordsplay, you name it they can do it.

Yixing looked upon the stage in awe. These people have worked all their lives to achieve their strength. In the end every one of these people would make a difference to Eterna. They all posses the privilage to stand and fight for their country, a privilege in which was robbed from him.

His gaze was fixed upon the last finalist. Yixing had a feeling that he was going to be the one to win the mentorship this year. Just from watching him Yixing realized that he was extremely skilled. His jousting was precise and deadly. His archery was phenomenal as well. His swordplay was pretty good compared to the rest, but wasn’t up to par with his other skills. That shouldn’t matter too much though, calculated Yixing. His future mentor would be the greatest swords master of all of Eterna, Lee Aejung.

“Yixing, what are you thinking about?” Inquired Joonmyun carefully. Yixing had a tendancy to space out a lot, but that is usually because he tends to over think things. Like the difference between a dozen of flowers and a baker’s dozen recalled Joonmyun. That was a very long tedious debate.

Yixing blinked and turned to Joonmyun sheepishly. “Sorry hyung. I was guessing who would be the knight selected for the mentorship.”

Joonmyun laughed. “Any guesses so far? You have never been wrong about it so far. I think you should have been a judge. You have an eye for these types of things.”

“I wouldn’t say that.” Replied Yixing shyly. “I just like watching these types of things”

“I know.” Joonmyun nodded knowingly. Before either of them could continue Jongin appeared with an irritated Sehun in tow. Sehun’s head was a disheveled mess. Joonmyun was the first to ask. “What happened to you two?”

“Sehun broke Bro Code.”

“Did not!”

-  

At the violet fountain two girls were trying to clean off the Princess’s yellow dress while the Princess sulked unhappily. “I can’t believe it! My day is ruined.”

“It isn’t that bad.” Chriped Saehyun. “You still look awesome.”

Hyorin smiled at her happily. “Aww you’re so sweet. BUT THAT MEANS WOULD HAVE LOOKED BETTER THAN AWESOME IF MY DRESS WASN’T SOILED.”

“How did this happen anyways Hyorin Unnie?” asked the little scribe boy still dusting off the side of her dress.

“Some guy bumped into me. He followed me to apologize. Which is why I was a little bit late in coming here.” Confirmed the princess.

“Was he cute?” Commented Saehyun nonchalantly.

“…I don’t know. I didn’t really pay attention. You know how I get when I am mad.”

“True.”

“Guys! Aejung Unnie’s mentee is going to be announced.” Announced Hyunjae. All three girls sprinted towards the plaza upon hearing the commotion.

-

Aejung was standing between Woobin and Dongmin respectively. They were all standing up straight and proper for the awards ceremony. All of the knights have finished their performance and it was about time to announce who won the mentorship this year.

Aejung tried to whisper as discreetly as possible. “Tell me why again you are naming my mentee?”

Dongmin shuffled closer to Aejung and smiled. “Well since I didn’t get to name you I figured this is only fair.”

“I feel bad for him. Is he going to be ‘The Annihilator’?”

“Nope. I have a better idea.”

Woobin shook his head disapprovingly. “Shhh! It is starting!” Once the basic awards were given out it was time for the three legendary knights to bestow a title for the knight who has earned the mentorship. Woobin called him up onto the stage and placed a medal of honor around his neck. Aejung stood beside him to signify their new roles as mentee and mentor. Dongmin, the flamboyant man he was twirled his sword and tapped the kneeling knight on the shoulder.

“From here on out you are now and official mentee of Lady Knight Lee Aejung, and your title shall be Woo Byungho the WARRIOR!”

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THEME MUSIC

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5tLooPlf2Sw

Haha. Meet Byungho the Warrior! We are either going to like him or hate him.

I am not even sure. LOL.

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iheartsoojung
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Chapter 4: judging from my comment thus far (and how i am now on my third comment box), this chapter is really long. or, i am rambling too much. oh well. multicolored bandages. now i feel like you must actually acquire some. you should win the nation’s granddaughter title. lol. but aww, papa han. i know you’re out of the loop and all, which is why i feel the need to tell you that you should probably be weary of the baker boy across the street ;3

“by royal decree”- one hour ago. omg. lol. i like how saehyun is all up and ready to leave at a moment’s notice for some royal quest while papa han is just like “wtf just happened?” xD

lol jaerin- both complaining that “it was brutal” xD only one person makes the same hat? .____. why do i feel like my hat will never be the same after this chapter? lol.

“The Eterna’s Princess’s Tasks Force” sounds pretty darn legit. BUT ETERNITY SOUNDS BETTER. I LIKE IT. HOW YOU SNEAKED IT IN WAS BEATIFUL.

NOW LET US ALL RIDE INTO THE SUNSET.

(LA LI LA LA LA SAD NE E E ESS. SADNESSSSS. BINBIN, I LOVE YOU.)

(okay, bye. <3)
iheartsoojung
#2
Chapter 4: sehun. never done talking about rin. love sick puppy. yes. ;D jongin “hyung” needs to stop putting youngjae in all those headlocks though ;o he’s going to regret it later xD but. the cantebury tales. why. whyyyy. why would anyone want that? >< but hey, oh sehun! don’t be all pissy just because jongin ignored you to talk to…youngjae! (although I kind of understand because i wouldn’t be too happy if our roles were reversed. .___. hmm. thinking about it that way…carry on!)

waiting for that apology, oh sehun. waiting. ;D but omg, park hyorin style indeed. she would burst into a tavern with her “commoner clothes” and make youngjae scribble as fast as humanly possible. .____. it’s not…hiding, per se- and she found hyunjae rather easily anyway! lol.
aw. sehun and his jaw dropping and his complete lack of ability to get hyorin unnie’s attention <3 okay, feeling a little for him again. ;3 but he should feel for youngjae too, since youngjae just got dragged out. by the scribe boy bag. .____. MY COMMISSION ;A; lol.

omg rin noona. lol. if i read this enough, i am eventually going to start calling her rin noona lol. but ah- the scribe boy hat! xD it’s so easy to imagine her accosting so many random little boys xD

YOUNGJAE GOT GAAAAME. HAAAAAH. (possibly my favorite line in this chapter. lol.)

woobin oppa. that is all.


okay, I’m a liar, and that is not all. he is awesome ;3 but lol, aejung unnie, what a way to make all the knights try to lift/fit all those suitcases! hurt their man pride! haha. dongmin and aejung are cute though. even if dongmin ships aejung/byungho. .___. (WE SHALL SEE, OLD MAN. WE SHALL SEE.) i would wish for woobin to come back safely too. hah. xD

but awww, byungho is like a whiny little baby ;A; that is so easily pleased with the promise of horseback riding >< ooookay, definitely feeling for him. he might end up being my equivalent to your yuhan. .___. uh oh.
iheartsoojung
#3
Chapter 4: ayo wassup ;o this spaztastic comment is going to make less sense than usual, just cause youngjae’s got game ;3 (and sehun doesn’t hahaha xD) (okay, im sorry sehunnie don’t hurt me)

just curious, but did you name evian after the water bottle brand? lol.

hyorin unnie always has so much paper work to do. the only way she can finish them quickly and be done with them is to set them all on fire. .____.

sugar exports? coming late? THE PROBLEM MUST BE SOLVED. WE CANNOT HAVE OUR SUGAR EXPORTS COME LATE. (this really was my reaction though ;o) and, we, you know, have to help the citizens too…… ;D

once i read “botanical agent” i was like “IT’S HANNIE UNNIE’S SUSPICIOUS MUSHROOOOOM” lol.

princess hyorin style. i like that. sounds like a brand. ;3 but speaking of hyorin unnie’s “style”- hahahaha, sehun has no gaaaame. xD (and neither does yixing, apparently. hurt.)

jongin. laughing. hot. /shot. okay, but seriously, out of all the people to go to, I would much rather take my chances with yixing. xD i wonder how councilman oh would react to sehun’s mystery girl in yellow o_O i was about to call him “daddy oh” and was like…nopeeee. ;D

yixing has an arsenal of cheesy pick up lines? i see why we’re friends ;o LOL. i feel for you, yixing. i really do. i also feel for sehun- because he’s all grumpy and doesn’t want to hook up with the princess because he wants…the princess. heh. but i don’t feel for him all that much because he’s all “oh, but if she wasn’t in a hurry, she would have been all over me!” his sentence wasn’t finished, but im pretty sure that was where he was getting at. oh sehun. you bachelor of the century, you.

(but ten points to jongin for being right- and another seventeen million for being unbelievably gorgeous- about hyorin unnie not knowing about sehun’s existence.)

(wow, it's like i get more and more biased each and every single chapter. i'm almost scared to see what my comments will be like by chapter fifteen. .____.)
xtiggerytigerx
#4
Chapter 4: kekeke~ Author-nim! you are soo creative with your writing unlike my writing (: Keep updating! <3 <3 <3

and I totally love Youngjae's character right now. Aigoo he is like a baby but a sneaky one! *eyebrow wiggling* ALTHOUGH I DIDN'T KNOW HE WAS THAT YOUNG COMPARED TO ALL THE OTHER CHARACTERS! XD
xJungSquaredx
#5
Chapter 4: SO LIKE PART THREE? LOL.

AS I WAS SAYING, I WOULD SUPER HATE PAPER WORK. UGH. AERIN IS STUCK WITH PAPERWORK FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES. JOYYY.

BUT THUS, MY COMMENT IS COMING TO AND END. ;D

THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING LIKE ALL THE OTHER CHAPTERS. ;D YOUR UPDATES EXCITE ME AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. HWAITING!

PS. I AM LISTENING TO 2NE1'S I LOVE YOU FT. JUNG SUNGHA! :D
xJungSquaredx
#6
Chapter 4: PART TWO! GOOD LORD. I HATE SPLITTING MY COMMENTS. LOL. NEEWAYS!

HYORIN MADE THE DECREE AN HOUR AGO. SHE'S GIVING NO ONE A CHANCE TO THINK ABOUT IT. LOL. HYUNJAE AS NO CHOICE BECAUSE THE PRINCESS WENT TO GET HER HERSELF! AEJUNG DOESN'T REALLY GET A CHOICE BECAUSE SHE IS THE PRINCESS' PERSONAL LADY KNIGHT. LAWL. AND SAEHYUN HAS NO CHOICE TOO BECAUSE HYORIN MADE A DECREE FOR HER TO COME ALONG. NOT THAT SHE'D SAY NO ANYWAYS. HAHA. OMG. HYUNJAE WON'T GET PENALIZED FOR NOT FINISHING HER THINGY, RIGHT? MAKE THE PRINCESS PAY YOU FOR YOUR LOSS! LOL.

EVIAN IS A REALLY PRETTY NAME. HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THESE NAMES? HAHA. YOU NEED TO LIKE, SHOW ME YOUR WAYS. I SUPER LIKE THEM. ^^

OH. AND DONGMIN NEEDS TO STOP PUTTING ME AND BYUNGHO TOGETHER. LIKE NO. JUST NO. IT JUST DOESN'T WORK. OKAY? HE IS MY MENTEE AND WILL FOREVER BE MY MENTEE.

AND YOU ARE VERY WELCOME FOR THE POSTER~ XD IT WAS PRETTY FUN TO MAKE~ ;3 YOU KNOW, ONCE I GOT PASS THE INITIAL FRUSTRATION AND HATING OF GIMP AND ALL THINGS PHOTO EDITING. HAHA.

YOUNGJAE IS 14? WHAT? LOL. SUPEEEER LITTLE BOY. HAHA. AND LOL. I LIKE HOW YOU TALKED ABOUT YOUNGJAE'S SMALL SELF. LIKE HIS HANDS. IT MADE ME IMAGINE MAKNAE'S HANDS. HAHA.

ALSO. WHY IS PRINCESS HYORIN PACKING SO MUCH? DOESN'T SHE KNOW THAT IT'S GOOD TO CARRY LIGHT ON TRIPS? THE CARRIAGE IS LIKE, THERE TO CARRY HER THINGS. BECAUSE AEJUNG AND THE KNIGHTS ARE GUNNA RIDE THEIR HORSES. WILL SAEJAE HAVE TO SQUISH ALONG WITH THE PRINCESS? UNLESS WE'RE ALL GETTING OUR OWN HORSES. LOL. HYORIN CAN RIDE WITH ME. KEKEKE.

JONGIN IS KINDA ROUGH WITH YOUNGJAE. WHAT IS HE TRYING TO DO? KILL THE ONLY LITTLE BOY THAT WRITES FOR PEOPLE?? A HEADLOCK? SERIOUSLY? I NEED TO PUT HIM IN HIS PLACE ONE OF THESE DAYS. HAHA.

MY COMMENT IS LIKE ALL OVER THE PLACE BECAUSE I AM COMMENTING ACCORDING TO THE EVENTS THAT I REMEMBER READING. HAHA. SO MIANHE FOR THE MESSY SET UP. XP

WOOBIN DOES THE PAPER WORK FOR ME AND DONGMIN. AWHH. SUNBAE. THIS IS EXACTLY WHY I LOVE YOU.
xJungSquaredx
#7
Chapter 4: I AM THE ONE THAT NAMED US ETERNITY. OMG. WHAT? LOL. THAT JUST LIKE, MADE MY DAY. WE ARE ETERNITY! HEY! :D AND NOW TO COMMENT ON YOUR CHAPTER WITH ALL CAPS BECAUSE I AM TOO LAZY TO UNCAPS IT. LAWL.

OKAY. SO. I REALLY FEEL FOR THE PRINCESS. >< PEOPLE ARE ALWAYS LIKE, BEING A PRINCESS MUST BE NICE. ALL YOU DO IS SIT AND GET PAMPERED ALL DAY. WRONG. PRINCESS HYORIN JUST PROVED ALL YOUR BEAR ____ WRONG. IN YO' FACE! BUT YOU KNOW, BEING IN CHARGE OF PAPERWORK IS COOL AT TIMES. YOU GET TO GO ON QUESTS. LOLOL.

OMG. IT'S THE FREAKIN' MUSHROOM THAT HANNIE TOOK. HANNIE. THROW IT AWAY, RIGHT NOW! GOOD LORD. GURRRRL. YOU NEED TO BE MORE SUSPICIOUS OF SUSPICIOUS LOOKING VEGETATION! >< I FEAR FOR THE PHYSICIAN'S DAUGHTER. LIKE, SERIOUSLY.

AND YOUNGJAE GOT GAAAAAAAME. :D THAT'S MY MAKNAE! XD ALREADY, SEHUN THINKS HE HAS A RIVAL. LAWL. JONGIN IS LIKE A PROUD HYUNG THAT SEHUN DOESN'T LIKE MUCH AT THE MOMENT. HAHA. AND OMG. THEY INSULTED YIXING'S ABILITY TO WOO GIRLS. (THOUGH IT'S PROBABLY TRUE THAT HE'D FAIL AT IT. XP) BUT SAD. HAHA. SULAY DON'T EVEN SHOW UP IN THIS CHAPTER. LOLOL. BUT IT'S ALL GOOD. BECAUSE THE KWON TWINS DO. ;D OMG. DONGMIN AND AEJUNG ARE LIKE, HELLUH CUTE. LOLOL! OPPA~~ OPPA~~~ <3 HE LIKES IT WHEN I CALL HIM OPPA. AND I THINK I LIKE CALLING HIM OPPA TOO. LAWL. WOOBIN. OMG. I OBVIOUSLY FAVOR YOU MORE THAN YOUR BRO. PLEASE DO COME BACK SAFELY ON YOUR TRIPS~ DONGSAENG WILL BE AWAITING YOUR RETURN! BYUNGHO IS SO ADORABLE IN HERE. LOL. DEJECTED CHILD. HAHA. DUN WORRY BOY. NOONA WILL RETURN. ;D JUST GO BOTHER DONGMIN FOR A WHILE, BUT NOT WOOBIN, OKAY? HAVE FUN HORSEBACK RIDING!

AND DR. HAN IS LIKE A WORRIED FATHER. HAHA. HE DOESN'T WANT TO LOSE YOU~ HE'S GUNNA EITHER LIKE OR HATE JUNMYEON. BECAUSE HE'LL LIKE JUNMYEON BECAUSE HE'S A GOOD BOY. AND HE'LL HATE HIM BECAUSE HE IS THE ONE THAT WILL BE TAKING HIS DAUGHTER AWAY FROM HIM.

UGH. FREAKIN' LIMIT ON COMMENTS! ON TO PART TWO!
NoLimitxInfinite
#8
And one last thing since i just remembered lol
how does hyunjae, who is 17, manage to look 14 because that's what youngjae is xD mature looking boy? lol
NoLimitxInfinite
#9
Chapter 4: OMG EVERYONE’S DYING. WHAT IS THIS MADNESS?! WE NEED MORE MANPOWER FOR THE SUGAR!! ONTO THE QUEST WE SHALL GO! WHOOOO QUEST!!
LOL sehun. the poor sap still doesn’t know who the princess is. on a related note, jongin seems interested in the little scribe boy ;D isn’t homouality frowned upon back then lol
OMG I’M LAUGHING SO HARD WHEN RIN ENTERED. I HAVEN’T EVEN FINISHED THE SENTENCE THAT DESCRIBED HER ENTRANCE YET. OMG SEHUN. LOLOLOL it’s so cute watching youngjae call rin noona. i think i should make hyunjae do that. IF YOU SEE THIS HYUNJAE, YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO.
YOUNGJAE GOT GAME. OH YES HE DOES. BEAT THAT OH SEHUN.
I am loving aejunggie’s and dongmin’s relationship xD how she calls him oppa for doing something for her LOL but i pity daddy Han. He was right to be sceptical of when the decree that demanded the presence of his daughter was decreed LOL
OMG HOW ETERNITY ORIGINATES IN THIS STORY. INGENIOUS. OFF INTO THE SUNSET!
NoLimitxInfinite
#10
Chapter 3: Oh the duties of a princess. Oh well, as long as there's white chocolate involved, no one's complaining ;D

OMG DONGMIN. I don't think AeJung would be very happy to hear you say she and Byungho look cute together.. Lae will prevail!

"Your pasta last time wasn't too bad."
"...it was crunchy."
"It has character!"
LOL I love the Han family relationship xD but the father doesn't even notice the daughter's awkwardness when the topic of the baker boy was brought up xD ...and why does it feel like that mushroom will be very important...

LOL I am totally laughing about councilman im's proposal. And I'm not in a place where it is okay to be loud. I look stupid xD

Did he seriously just tell Thehun to 'woo' the princess? xD he is an awkward boy, but not as awks as Yixing :P it is really funny how he doesn't know his lady in yellow is actually the princess though.

Dang. Woobin and Dongmin are old lol

I love your long chapters (like so much) but it takes a while to read xD and since I'm waiting for class to start I'm glad it wasn't too long. However, I'd like to put in a request for Councilman Im to show up again~ ;D