Chapter 1: Okay never mind, I understand the whole Luhan, Yixing ordeal I put way too much thought into than I should have. I always make things more confusing than it needs to be OTL anyways I love the tragic story. Totally my cup of tea. Call me cruel, but I love reading angst and tragic stories lol

Chapter 1: The term '-ge' in Chinese isn't like how 'oppa' would be used in Korea. '-Ge' wouldn't be used by girls calling other males (boyfriends and such) but rather if they're your actual brothers. I'm not actually Chinese so I can't go too much in detail but I read about it somewhere and it's similar to the Japanese term of 'older brother'. Just thought I should mention this since you included it when Yu called Yixing '-ge'. On another note, I'm slightly confused on the whole story... If Yixing was the prince, then who's Luhan? Maybe I should re-read this heh

Chapter 1: oh but nice story! i really enjoyedit although i shipped yixing with yu more haha but yea, nice stry!

Chapter 1: luhans name isn't xiluhan, but luhan. his last name is lu

Chapter 1: One day he left her... We'll meet again... Does this mean Yixing left her all those years ago because he died? And by meeting again he didn't mean in that life! okay okay but luhan does he die happily by watching her dance? she probably bled to death or something i get that but luhan's fate is a mystery to me >_<;;

Chapter 1: I knew Yixing was probably the prince. ><
That story was so great. It was beautiful. I cried and threw my iPod when her feet were bound, and then I cried and threw my iPod when she danced again. Her poor tiny feet.
She drowned, right? That's what it seemed like, but I just want to be sure.

Chapter 1: Omfg yixing was really the prince...I was wondering if he could have been swapped but I wasn't sure...gahh this sTory is pretty amazing it makes me despair for my own attempts to write angst... I like how you left the ending kind of open-ended, I think it gave the story a kind of "wistful hope" feel instead of just pure out angst. This is a fantastic oneshot!

Chapter 1: This was astonishing and meaningful. I found every aspect of this twisted Cinderella story amazing. How heartless both the mother and father can be and whatnot. I didn't even expect Yixing to be crippled slash handicapped, and was the prince turned to servant; whereas Luhan transformed from a peasant to a prince. Blood... Why did I not think of it's significance earlier? It didn't mean their death but somehow their life seems like Romeo and Juliet's star-crossed lover title. Two people whose love is true and pure cannot unite due to circumstances. I loved this beautiful tragedy (angst was it?).

Chapter 1: Angsty...but it is beautiful written. Kinda sad though