Just when I thought this guy was nice!!

Lost In Korea

 

    "So how do you like Korea?" Baro asked

  

    " it's good.....I guess" I totally lied

 

     " well since your  new here, you need some friends!" He suggested

 

     "  alright! I've had enough!! I Dont want FRIENDS!! I DON'T NEED YOU!!!!! AND I DONT WANT TO LIVE HERE!!!!"  
 
i shouted, which made me feel sad cuz he's so nice and I'm being mean to him,
 
  
    " I....I ......I'm sorry...." He said
 
 
     " no, I'm sorry..... I'm not fit for Korea, you've been so nice to me and I really wanna be friends but, I just can't spend another
 
minute here.." I apologized
 
 
   " well you could at least spend one more day enjoying it, come on ill show you my room," he suggested AGAIN
 
 
   " ok doesn't that just sound reaaaallyy wrong?" I asked
 
 
 
    " hahahahaha!! I like your humor!"  He complimented me
 
 
   " thanks, but I wasn't trying," I explained
 
 
   
 After that he just smiled at me, woah! Sparkly teeth!! As we walked along the hallway, there was a huge decorated door,
 
and baro slid a key in the Golden doorknob, and right before my eyes there I saw the best penthouse ever!!!!!
 
it was so beautifully decorated, it had beige walls, a lovely sent of roasted nuts mixed with roses, it also had soft cushy chairs,
 
and in the dining room there was a marbled table, it had a second floor which I guess was their rooms, and each door had beautiful
 
  golden doorknobs,
 
 
    " woah! You live here?!?!?" I asked while my mouth was gaping opened
 
 
" yup!! Go ahead open any door!!" He said while cheekily smiling
 
 
I opened the door that had a star on it, there i saw soooooo many amazing boy clothes!!!! It was like a mall in there!! But then I saw 
 
a boy tying on a shirt !! Just then I realized it was......retarted train boy...
 
 
" You!!!" I shouted which made him flinch and made baro gasp
 
 
" CRAZY WOMAN GIRL?!?!?" He asked shouting
 
 
" sooooo, you've met....?" Baro asked 
 
 
" yes, but I regret it!!!!" I asked
 
 
" why'd you let crazy woman in?!?!" Retarted boy asked,
 
 
" because he's a gentlemen!!!!" I replied 
 
 
 " you take that back cat lady!!!!" He forced
 
 
" I.....LIKE.......DOGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I shouted while charging at him,
 
 
soon I was on top of his back and we were soon wrestling, I was pulling his hair while he was slapping me, then he started to pin 
 
me down so I pushed his face on the ground,
 
just then the door swung open 
 
 
" Jazmine GET OFF HIM!!!!" The girl shouted..... Wait that's ......Woohee .....
 
 
" Woohee?" I asked
 
 
" Woohee?" Retard boy asked
 
 
" hey Woohee!" Baro said
 
 
" Jazmine get off NOW!!!!" Woohee forced
 
 
" alright, alright...... Wait... How do these 2 know you?" I asked
 
 
" Jazmine...... Jinyoung is my new guy..." She mumbled
 
 
" who the " cheese" is Jinyoung?!?"
 
 
" Him..." She replied while pointing to retard boy ,
 
 
 
 
 
 
OOOOOHHHHHH!!!!! So here's chapter five!!, hope you like it!!!
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hey guys! Uhhhh chpter 5 got accidentally deleted 4 times, do you think I should still continue pls comment

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pusanwookieprince
#1
Chapter 4: Update soon... it's getting more and more interesting
pusanwookieprince
#2
It's interesting.
deibaby03 #3
Chapter 3: Well... Hahahahaha i wrote it first :P
-shaigel33-
#4
Chapter 2: I mean deibaby I don't mean die!
-shaigel33-
#5
Chapter 2: Omg die baby I was just about to write this chapter then you wrote it I was going to make it a better chapter, :p
sunny_m
#6
Update soon please!