Porcelain Girl

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As my life was about to end a girl jumped in and saved my life…

Not just any girl but a beautiful one…

She was beatiful as a porcelain doll…

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Foreword

Hi guys, so this is my first story on this site. So tell me on what you think on this story so if I should do more or note.

Thanks, Phoebe~

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Gazeru #1
Chapter 2: It was a nice fic but yeah, just like what nyankat_rina said, you have some grammar and spelling mistakes. But I think you'll improve in the future so don't worry ^.^
nyankat_rina #2
Chapter 1: Is ther girl going to be alright? ;A; The story's nice but you have a few grammar and spelling errors. ^^
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