Sorry but this is an update, I'll be doing an squel to this soon IF you like my story, so please comment on what you think of it and how I can inprove, so I can become a better writer. Thanks, Phoebe
Chapter 2: It was a nice fic but yeah, just like what nyankat_rina said, you have some grammar and spelling mistakes. But I think you'll improve in the future so don't worry ^.^
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