One

When the First Snow Fell

Bae Suzy was there again, sitting at her favourite spot in the middle of the frozen garden. Morning dew became tiny icicles that decorated the carpet grass and the trees, now void of leaves, stood unmoving in the chilly winter breeze.

But none of these mattered to her. Clad in a thin t-shirt and track pants, with only a single wool cardigan to shield her from the cold, Suzy rocked methodically back and forth, her slim arms wrapped around her knees.

Her eyes were unfocused as she gazed into the distance, beyond the neat white fence that told of her boundaries – a necessity to keep her from contact with the society that existed beyond.


Mrs Bae stood watching her daughter, her heart heavy with guilt. From experience, she knew she couldn’t do anything to bring Suzy back into the house when she decides to head out to the garden.

The doorbell rang, interrupting the silence that shrouded the house. Sighing, Mrs Bae stepped back from the window. Passing the bottom of the stairs, she called out, “Sungjong! Your friend is here I think.”

She hurried to the door, pausing to glance out of the window at the boy who stood in front of the gate. It was a habit that she had acquired for a long time now – twelve years to be exact.

With a smile, she flicked the switch that commanded the automatic gates, inviting the boy into the front yard.


Kim Myungsoo gazed in awe at the spacious bungalow houses that lined the street. It was funny how Sungjong preferred going to his rather cramped apartment then have him over here. It’s been five years since Sungjong moved here but Myungsoo had never been over once.

Seventeen. He stopped, seeing the engraved numbers on the stone wall. Lifting his hand out of the warmth of his pocket, he pressed the doorbell once before stepping back to wait for an answer.

A movement caught his eye. Peering closer, he noticed a girl in the middle of the garden, rocking herself gently. Judging by her movements, she didn’t seem to mind the cold, but her red ears told otherwise.

The gate slid open and he stepped in, bowing down with a smile when he spotted a lady who he assumes is Mrs Bae. He couldn’t hold her gaze, his eyes constantly shifting to the young girl. There was something intriguing about her, the way she seemed so distant and oblivious.

“That’s Suzy.” Mrs Bae broke the silence. There was no response from the girl. “She’s like that most of the time,” Mrs Bae continued with a sad smile. “You might not understand, but she’s different.”

“How so?” Myungsoo asked, unable to contain his curiosity. Mrs Bae kept quiet for a moment as he stepped closer to Suzy. Crouching down beside her, he could see that she was flawlessly beautiful. Slipping off his ear mufflers, he tucked her long dark hair gently behind her ear and placed it on for her.

“So you won’t get frostbites,” he murmured softly.

“She can’t understand you, dear.” Mrs Bae tugged at his arm gently. “She’s… what many will call a feral child.”

But even as he was being ushered towards the front door where Sungjong was waiting, he thought he saw a hint of a smile playing on her lips.

And that moment, was when the first snow fell.


Suzy could see from the corner of her eye, someone approaching her. Refusing to meet his eye, she continued rocking, the steady momentum singing her a silent lullaby.

Strange people always wanted to see her, stare at her, and speak to her in a language she didn’t fully understand. They forced her to look at them, forced her to follow the noises they made while waving large flat objects with some drawings on them. She didn’t like it one bit.

She felt someone gently pushing her hair back and putting on something warm and furry on her ears. Almost instantly, the biting cold melted away. He murmured something that was muffled by the thing over her ears. Not that she’d understand either way.

He didn’t make her look his way and let her carry on with her rocking. He didn’t talk loudly and make her open to utter those weird sounds that she only vaguely remembered uttering before. He didn’t ask her anything but gave her exactly what she needed.

Suzy felt her lips curling up slightly at the corners as comfortable warmth radiated from within. She had learnt this while observing her family – the expression her daddy gave when he played with her amidst the crisp amber leaves in autumn, the expression her mummy made when she received the bunch of flowers daddy handpicked for her in summer, the expression Sungjong had when he brought home a golden cup looking like how she looked when she rolled around the muddy banks of a river in early spring.

So this was how it felt, she thought. Releasing one hand and stretching it out, she unintentionally caught a snowflake that instantly melted in the warmness of her palm.

So this, was when the first snow fell.


 

So here's the first chapter.

A little action can go a long way. As cliche as it sounds, I always believe in this. Because you'll never know when it might just let someone feel understood, for once in their lives.

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user555 #1
Chapter 10: Amazing story, thanks
my_mich05
#2
Chapter 10: this is a sad story but nevertheless a good one and an emotional too..
macchiato-
#3
I am so thankful that I found your story in between the recommendation lists that I scrolled through.

The title really pulled me in - "When the First Snow Fell." It's so poetic and seemed to have a lot of hidden meanings that are related to the plot. Beautiful.

The story, it's amazing. You kept it simple yet meaningful, and by the end, you made us readers feeling the pain of both Suzy and Myungsoo. I like how things were related to each other and was not stated as obvious as other writers tend to. And I especially love the ending, for I had thought that the two of them would end up being reunited after so long they got separated. The twist at the end was simply amazing.

I am not a MyungZy shipper, almost at all. Not even a Miss A nor Infinite stan - but for a beautifully written story like yours, how would biases take matter? Thank you for writing this, I'll make sure to check your other stories :-)
Suzyelfs #4
Chapter 10: Dis is sad story.i dun knw y i cried like hell.like suzy really lost to me..haish..great piece of work author.love it sooo much.
watermelon
#5
I browsed through your stories and this title of yours caught my eyes. Honestly speaking, I wanted to sleep but your story kept me up all the way until I finished it. This is simply sweet. Your description is good but not overwhelming. (: I like how the plot is not complicated but has a meaning behind every event. How Suzy's mother and Sungjong knew and had long forgiven Myungsoo for his father, how Suzy remembered him and every bit of it. I truly enjoyed reading this story, including your author's note. ^^
It's saddening and unfortunate for Suzy to get into an accident but I'm fine with it. I have always been an angst reader who appreciate author's cruelty.(; *shrugs*
I would admit that I was looking forward to Suzy joining the others in the crowd and to see Myungsoo and Sungjong's surprised faces but I guess, fate always have its ways at things. Not everything turn out to be what you want them to be, I understand. Thank you for reminding us. <3
Have an awesome day! :D
ps. I just thought I've to comment on this one when I am on comp so here I am with my poorly expressed comment. :$
vanniaaa
#6
such a beautiful story! ;_; it's short yet so memorable (Y)
myoungjunim
#7
Chapter 10: omg;___; this is one of the fanfic that i have read so nice... but the ending. i like the way you describe the details it is really nice ♡
blissful
#8
Chapter 10: oh gosh ;_; i finally got some time to finish reading this story, but ahhhh i am in tears now *sniffs*
i think the ending suited the tone of the story though, and it is sweet to see Myungsoo still remembering Suzy <3
Thank you for the great read! ^_^