Best Absolute Perfect Warriors

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Best Absolute Perfect Warriors, a.k.a BAP Warriors used to be at the top of their game. They've been champions of various street dance competitions inlcuding the biggest in Seoul, SEOUL DANCE JAM. Due to one conflict inside the group, they lost members and built their own groups that beat them in the following years. BAP Warriors had fallen, now with only 5 members left, they start to come back at their feet with hopes of bringing back the group in the way it was before. Conflicts still continue to arise inside the small group, especially with their new recruit.

Foreword

Annyeong!

I'm here with another fic that is an entry to shineecrazed and TofuCow's Contest- serenade || a oneshot writing challenge.

 

I received a simple but quite difficult prompt for me so I had troubles in coming up with a short story which is a oneshot. I always have troubles in writing short stories, I always come up with long stories like one time when my classmates refused to review my 'short' story as a project in our English class because my story kinda reached about 10 pages I think with an average font size. 

 

I chose BAP as the characters because they fit the 'street dance' and 'gangster-like' theme of the story like Step Up movies. I was also inspired by 'Warriors' song of BAP that made me continue with this storyline. 

 

My best choice was Beast and other choices were SHINee and Nu'est (my ultimate biases, teehee~) but I thought SHINee and Nu'est won't fit much the gangster and street dance kind of theme so it would have been Beast. Then I listened to some B.A.P songs while I was coming up with a plot then ta-da~ B.A.P became the main characters!

I hope I did well in writing this. It's my first time writing oneshots and actually this is only my second story in AFF. I just hope the story won't be much cliched and if this matches yours, it's a complete coincidence! I don't mean to copy or steal or anything! I thought this on my own with inspirations from various kpop songs and Step Up movies. 

 

I want to thank Rawr27 for my awesome and fantastic poster that he only did for only an hour. I was shocked he got it finished after I requested, exactly just that day. Also view his shop HERE.

Thank you to: polyamorous advertisements for the advertisement!

I have asked for REVIEWS about this story. You may view them in CHAPTER 2!

 

PROMPT USED:

Since it's been long since I created this fic and the contest has ended. I will reveal my prompt! So let's see why I chose to have this kind of story!

Prompt is: NO MERCY-BAP.

This contest and prompt is the reason why I became a Baby and had fallen in love with BAP too. So, this fic is kind of important for me. :)

So why this story? Let's make it short.

My interpretation of the song is about love for music. It's kind of sharing music and how BAP wanna show it of. They are the king like that. And the theme of the MV, at first glance, makes me want to do a fic about music so here it is! Ta-da~ *sparkles*

Please COMMENT, SUBSCRIBE and tell me what you think of this story. 

 

 

UPDATED: March 6,2013: Corrected  some grammar issues that I failed to see before.

March 12, 2013: Corrected other issues again.

April 18, 2013: Added REVIEWS chapter and revealed the prompt used.

May 6, 2013:  Updated and edited CHAPTER 2. Sadly, I couldn't re-format them.

May 12, 2013: Added one review and did corrected mistakes

Sept. 27, 2013: edited

March 16, 2014: foreword edited

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arrow45
#1
Chapter 3: amazing story i could tell you that. its very different form the other which make it interesting . daebak!
Claudine_NG #2
Chapter 3: I just read this fanfic >_< YES, I'd love to read a sequel. I'd surely sub and comment on every chapter. I really hope you'd write a sequel and if it's possible... A full length story as a sequel.
xiseyre #3
Chapter 1: Great Story. Something rather better than any other boring ‘same old love songs‘. Listen to my advice, you should really do a sequel out of this! ^v^
JongKeyFanXD
#4
Go Yeoboooooo ~~~~~ you can do it cant wait XD