Goodbye

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A short Luhan one-shot I decided to just post up, hope you guys like it! 

Foreword

**Warning: Death**

 

Another awesome poster by Banana Graphics, go check them out becasue they are a bunch of awesome bananas =]

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connieehyunmi #1
Chapter 1: i have to say, it was confusing BUT very emotional. As a reader, the love described in the text was very touching. Keep it up!
Advice: Try writting who's POV each paragraph was written in OR. Try to use different colors for different characters.
Besides that, the scenario was great. :)
bonchan #2
Chapter 1: Omo this is so sad. he should give sungmin a chance to talk TT__TT
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