Repetition

Description

Words - do they lose their meaning after constantly being spoken or do they grow stronger with each repetition?

Foreword

You (~~~)

 

- Smart

- Wary of people's intentions

 

Yoo Youngjae

 

 

- Caring

- Has a way with words

- Someone who understands

 

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Are words perhaps then just a tool to disguise ill intentions?

Author's Thoughts
Park_HyeSun
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YuxieWuxie #1
Chapter 1: Abhasdfiohsfiohsdipfhpsodgjofgj[dfj... I almost cried at the end... It is SO beautiful. If I could chose, I want my first relationship to be JUST like this! I wish someone liked me as much as Youngjae loved her in this story *wipe tears* It was beautiful... *sigh*
Gazeru #2
Chapter 1: nice story ^.^
Do you love writing stories because I noticed that you write quite long paragraphs.
skyblaze208 #3
Chapter 1: AW. CUTE. >< LOVE IT.
Some things to edit: there are some spelling and grammatical errors, so you should go through and pick those out. Also, with dialogue, every time the speaker changes or a new idea begins, it should be a new paragraph. For example, instead of:
"Ooh," said Youngjae with a feigned pained expression. "Sensitive topic." Your eyes flickered to his. "I don't see you denying it though," you mentioned....
It should be:
"Ooh," said Youngjae with a feigned pained expression. "Sensitive topic."
Your eyes flickered to his. "I don't see you denying it though," you mentioned....
So yeah. Hope that helped. Will I be reading more BAP from you? :D
XlovebbX #4
Chapter 1: WOW! this story is so awesome :D it is very well written and i really enjoyed reading it <3
i was just slightly confused at the end because of the flashback and than back into reality. i didn't realized it at first :S
lizzylilly #5
Chapter 1: eeeeheeeee Youngjaeeeeee
bookwormforkpop #6
Chapter 1: I enjoyed it :D It was a very different idea, but i found myself picturing the oc and youngjae in the greenhouse, and i liked the different scenery and plot. <3
youngjaesbby #7
Chapter 1: I love the OC and it was really fluffy and cute ^.^ it's a little confusing because you switched back and forth between flashbacks and stuff though, maybe you could italicize to make it clearer?
Other than that I loved it <333 youngjae asdfghjkl
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