Chapter 1: haha. okay, the story's quite funny, romantic, & the best is fluffy~<3
The story is cute to be honest :D
Well actually about the grammar thingy, I noticed that you use "have" on she.. she/he/it needs to use "has" while "you" and "I" needs to use "have"
I guess that's the only thing I noticed?
But actually I'm not quite a picky reader when it comes to very few grammar mistakes, I mostly focuses on the story's plot, information and its so-called "flesh" or "meat". LOL.
Anyways, I'M GLAD THAT YOONA AND KYUHYUN BECAME ONE AGAIN. I MEAN THEY BECAME TOGETHER. FREAKIN' TOGETHER <3 and I'm glad that YURI AND DONGHAE are open minded that they let go of them. <3 That's what you call LOVE. <3 HOHO. It's gettin' cheesy and stuff here <3
But anyways, what attracted me the most is your note down there. :)
It made me smile, to be quite honest, HAHA. I am eating chips here and I stood up and forgot that I was holding the plastic container, I almost tripped when I stood up 'cause I'm too focused reading your message.
Anyways, IT'S REALLY A BLESSING TO HAVE YOU AS A FRIEND :) Haha! <3 And yeah, thank you so much. Having you as a friend is REALLY FUN :)
Please let's stay like this forever. :)
Haha, and I'm glad that you're finally addressing me as your BFF. :)
That's flattering <3 HOHO.
<3 Happy Holidays! :)
May you enjoy your vacation! :) Let's stay friends forever
NO. I mean, let's stay friends till tomorrow.. 'cause "tomorrow" isn't going to end right?
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