Jongin Says You're Never Coming Back

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Jongin Says You're Never Coming Back

 

 

 

In a world where beauty is revered and time does not stop for the important moments, Kyungsoo grieves for what was taken away from him. Love came to Do Kyungsoo in the form of a cheeky twenty-year-old guy with eyes like stars, and hands like the pearly craters of the moon what with its dents, and remarkable creases. His name is Byun Baekhyun. And the light went out of Kyungsoo's life when he found Baekhyun's body slumped against a large rock beside a river. 

 

"He's gone," Jongin says, but Kyungsoo isn't too sure if that's what he really said. There's something on his ears, something that prevents him from hearing the obvious. Kyungsoo wishes that his vision would turn black too, so that he won't have to stand still as Jongin tows Baekhyun's body into the river as if it weighed like feathers. 

 

He can't remember how they ended up here, how they arrived. All he knew was that they recieved a call about Baekhyun, telling them to go to this place and here they were; ragged and anxious. Kyungsoo's lips are quivering. Jongin kept on mumbling about what they should do; whether they should report this to the police or call an ambulance or something. Kyungsoo knows that if Baekhyun was still alive, he would have found those things unecessary. Baekhyun's position was too unnatural to be okay. 

 

"Put him to the river," Those were the only words that Kyungsoo said. Baekhyun loves the water, he once told Kyungsoo that if possible, he'd build them a house beside the sea so that they can wake up to the sound of the waves kissing the shore. Everything seems funny now, as if they were words spoken by another person in another universe. 

 

It's three in the afternoon, and Baekhyun was supposed to be in Kyungsoo's house by now. But fate kept on being its sick self, deciding that Kyungsoo needs to experience something like this by stealing the most important person he's ever known. Jongin sucessfully drags the bloody Baekhyun in the cold water. 

 

When the current flowed stronger, Baekhyun's body glided away, taking Kyungsoo's heart with it.

 

But here's one thing that they didn't know as they left the swampy opening: Byun Baekhyun isn't dead yet. 

 

And that it would take a man named Park Chanyeol to discover him. 

 

Foreword

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BaekYeol (Baekhyun / Chanyeol)

R for some slightly disturbing scenes.

three-shot.

 

 

TERRIBLY inspired by the story of L’Inconnue de la Seine.

and contrary to everything, this is actually fluff otay. 

dedicated to Youngji & London & my CarCar bc they wanted the D.

 

 

 

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[JSYNCB] this is a long- title. first chap will be up today.

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kikinana #1
are you going to continue this story?
azeli_ouo #2
Chapter 1: Holy flipping uhg~ are you going to continue this?
OuO
i have a feeling Baekhyun and Kyungsoo would meet again and theyd freak our and uhrg...

i love your metaphors and other shizus 8D
Rolllikeadonut
#3
Chapter 1: I totally loved this... It looks very interesting and I really want to know how Jongin and Kyungsoo end up togheter ^^. Oh, an I totally loved the fact that you used metaphors and stuff! Thanks for the update. Heart~(?)
dyonamite
#4
Chapter 1: Hahaha Channie you creep!
Awww poor Kyungsoo, I wish they would at least get back together even if for just a while and then maybe break up to go to their original otps. Ohohoho.
bluecoins
#5
Chapter 1: OMG this is good! I especially love the interaction between Baek and Chanyeol. Please please please update soon!
Vicky_Zeng
#6
Chapter 1: Although I was never a fan of... gay(?) fanfics, your storyline is really wonderful <3 I always read the baekyeol fanfics you write because your storyline is just too wonderful, LOL xD (Though I always end up thinking why in the world did I agree to read a gay fanfic, though I have to agree the storyline is too awesome, and your descriptions are too awesome too ;_; )
OhItsYing
#7
That is so creepy, just finding a body in a river and then finding that it's alive and then finding that it's a hot guy.
Did someone kill baekhyun or did he hurt himself or what? They should at least take him to the hospital or give CPR!!!!
But then baekyeol won't meet.


The poster is gorgeous <3

Update soon!! :) x
ll0vex3_her
#8
Chapter 1: then again, normal people doesn't own a river. so yeah.
ll0vex3_her
#9
Chapter 1: I don't even ship Kyungsoo with Baekhyun and the first whole part just made me want to crey crey bc why are you so amazing whyyy why Kyungsoo whyyyy.

Okay what happened to poor, poor Baekhyun? You're sick, okay. After killing Luhan, you're attempting murder on Baekhyun? I will slaughter you ;A; I wonder what does Kyungsoo and Jongin has to do with this /is veli veli curious.

LOL Krisyeol cannot be stopped. These two scare everyone's daylight out of them xDD

WHYYY 'Santa'? WHYYYY. It should have been 'PANDA'! /bricked

Puh-lease, freaked out? I think Chanyeol almost had a heart attack BC NORMAL HUMANS DO NOT FIND A CORPSE IN THEIR RIVER TOUCHING THEM. Otay, well...not exactly a corpse and not exactly touching...STILL.

Baekhyun is alive, yay! Memory loss...erm, another yay? For Chanteol? Maybe not for Kyungsoo though...or maybe. Jongin, stop creeping out everyone about articles on wikipedia /eyes Lien yeah that applies to you too btw you didn't really tell me what happened about blue in the peephole or something stop creeping me out at three in the morning my heart cannot take it otay /kidding i like being creep out by you /okay but not too much

Oh. My. Gods. Chanyeol. /dies laughing forever at this creepy stalker /yes yes Baekhyun has nice hands /don't call him Bacon /but bacon is a nice nickname for Baekhyun /dies laughing once more

...Baekhyun got lost? Like seriously? He lost his memory and he faces a creeper (sorry, Channie!) and now he's lost? LOLLL XD /feels bad bc I'm laughing /omg i hate you lien
xingtizen
#10
Well...this is kinda depressing...


PLS UPDATE AND UPDATE YOUR OTHER FFS TOO PLS????

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