Chapter 1: This is really good omg.. It's written so artistically and .. It's just amazing!
Why don't you have more comments?! Omg
I love how you showed the progression of their relationship and how at the end they basically ended up where they stared... Not caring what everyone else thinks and just going with what they think is right.
:') this is beautiful <333

Chapter 1: Wow, this is exactly what society is like
I judge in the same way, I seem to think I am the worthy of an opinion on someone else's relationship when it has nothing to do with me
Very clever and very well written
It would be nice to learn not to care what others think
I need to try and do this >.<