Forever Together

Description

What happens when people meet?
 

Either they become friends, foes or they just forget about it.

But what if these people are not only two or three, but lots of groups, bands and gangs.?

What if the whole school and almost the whole city knows them..??

Will they be friends...???

Will they start a sort of a war....????

Will they be able to just ignore each other.....?????

What if I tell you, that their future depends on only one person.....
.

What if this person is.......


       Kim - Jae - Joong

Foreword

heyy... everyone..!! :)
I just wanted to say that I changed some things e.g. the age..
because.. I don't know, I think it'd be better that way.. :)
I really hope you enjoy my story..

PS.: sorry if the updates last too long..
        I really try to make it as fast as possible... :)

 

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MBLAQIE #1
Is this yunjae or jaechun?
MBLAQIE #2
Chapter 5: Yunho is back Haha. ......unless that asent Yunho o.O
MBLAQIE #3
the plot is interesting Kekeke a bit confused if its talking in real life or in their minds but i got it Haha and with the question you asked i think eventually their will be since jaes nickname is sugar princess and 'him' already sort of fell on him and kissed him so im guessing, ' him' is a Lil _______ed Haha
Jaebeol96 #4
Hello, here's the author.. :)
Would someone mind if I'll change the story a little and make it without ..?? At least at the beginning.. :)
Would be very nice of you, if you would answer as fast as possible.. :) I just think, that it doesn't suit to the story at the moment.. it's more like romantic and dramatic.. I think so.. Tell me if I'm wrong..
tokiyo
#5
Chapter 10: he he he actually i love ur first line 4 this story............how u describe jongie so well.... with a fragile characteristic, dark past , victim of ual abuse eventhough not that extent......jongie still right??? hmmm and then jongie parents.....u make them so mysterious........why them so strict to jongie or even don't care about their only son......is there problems between them??? is jongie not their real son or result from love affair??? he he he just my thought and then Yochuniee ....... i like his characteristic here.......friendly.....nice.....for the first impression.......but u make his characteristic change into possessive one.....hmmm i know jongie can make people crazy.....but it's too fast........and Yunho still mystery here? and last Mir hmm please don't make him bad person here.....he just 2 cute.....he a strong candidate 4 real friends 4 jongie but not 4 lover.......he he he i dont want jongie hurt anymore and lose trust 2 everyone.......he he he thats my comments 4 every character.....and then one more about ure writing style.........to much POV here......and the contents is the same with the action......it's like u repeatedly the story......hmmm it's could be better if u put it with more action and little POV as complement.......so ure story it's not like mind reader he he he.........little critic dont make u hurt right???? over all...like i said before i love ure base line story......u just hv 2 take a little time 2 built the character more strong time 2 time......so it will be a great fic....i guesss......he he he ganbate ne.......fighting. he he he i m sorry if my english is bad......it just 2nd languages 4 me.
tokiyo
#6
he he he thanks 4 update......happy new years........ oo(>.<)oo
tokiyo
#7
Chapter 9: yeiiii update........ck ck ck jae sure makes everyone insane.....hmmm poor mir......hi hi hi it's not love 3angels but 4 or maybe 5 he he he but i like it....if just war between yunho and yochun...... thanks 4 an update :)
tokiyo
#8
Chapter 7: omooooo what happen 2 jongiee....is he alright??? he he he i'm waiting 4 jongie POV already.....and thanks to arrange it's nicely... i love it >.<
tokiyo
#9
Chapter 6: wow i dont know why u dont hv good feedback here!!! this fic is good....hmmmm why this fic didn't appear in the latest update? becauze of that readers don't know ure fic an update. and hmmmm if u don't mind cant u (author-shi) arrange ure fic nicely so i'm not confusing 2 read....not long pharagraph it's make my head burn :) he he he just suggest......i love the line of ure story......lovetriangle it's sure interesting :)
tokiyo
#10
Chapter 5: jjangggg fast update......