I Still Remember

Description

"Winter can be cold for those with no memories." - From the movie An Affair to Remember.

 

Foreword

I remember this pond. We used to come here once a year to ice skate. Smiling at the memory, I sat down on a log. My hand traced the carving on the log.

MS x NE

How long has it been since I last saw him?  Oh right. I remember now. Two years.

 

Characters:

Him: Kim Myungsoo

Her: Son Naeun

 

This is for the writing contest Outside The Box  

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/336380/outside-the-box-writing-contest-contest-shinee-superjunior-writing-you-writingcontest-exo

Yup, that's the link.

Feel free to read it , and comment!! :D 

I used a prompt for the description. 

Hope you guys like it! -LOLxbox 

Author's Thoughts
candym0nster
oh yeah....this story is already completed, but if it keeps updating, that's cuz i'm just making grammer corrections!! :D thankx for reading
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krystalnini #1
wow :D
ButterflyShida #2
Sweet story... lot of imagination
Kpopiseverything #3
Chapter 3: It's so cute XD and sweet XD but sad at the same time!!! XD
Kpopiseverything #4
Chapter 3: It's so cute XD and sweet XD
etchasketch #5
Chapter 3: oh my god TT__TT this is so sad but sweet. i dont even know what myungsoo looks like and i love this story. good luck on the contest!
babymichiie #6
Chapter 3: Wow, your story is really different from those that I've read before. Interesting. Btw, I just came across this from the contest entry list. :)
exojongdae #7
Chapter 1: I love Pinkfinite!!
Nice story, and good luck with the contest!
Nesnesa #8
Chapter 3: i-i think i cry. No good no good I shouldnt cry, but this story is freakin beautiful that I had to cry <:')
wishonastarrynight #9
Chapter 3: I won't be harsh or anything, since you didn't ask for thoughts to improve it in some way. But, I really liked the first chapter (aside from the fact that the present scenes were written oddly). It was fun to look back. But then the jump from that to the second chapter kind of lost my attention. Either way, it was a great story idea and it was written beautifully!
Also, I don't think that you should put a clarification of what happened in the story at the end. If you need to put that, then there must be something wrong with the story. A short story/oneshot needs to feel complete, it needs to feel like you understand everything about it...if someone doesn't understand it at the end and asks for a clarification, then there's gotta be something off. Either way, good luck on the writing competition! ^___^ It seems very promising! :D I hope the judges consider you closely, if they don't choose you that is! :D
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