Bittersweet

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“Anyone who falls in love is searching for the missing pieces of themselves. So anyone who's in love gets sad when they think of their lover. It's like stepping back inside a room you have fond memories of, one you haven't seen in a long time.” 
― Haruki Murakami

 

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© FLONI MAE KIM | 2012

 

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Reviewed by: TwiceAzeline @ Into the Woods Review Shop

Reviewed by Imagination_tofu @BetterStoriesREVIEWSHOP

Reviewed by: macchiato- @ ✭ enchanted review shop ✭

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dyodyopie #1
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uniquegirl #2
Chapter 1: I was drowning in your story when I read it. This is such a beautiful story. You make a unique story that is so rare to be found now. Although I don't really like them to break up, I still love the ending of it. Great job! Hope you will make more stories like this ^^ Keep writing XD
Givaren #3
Chapter 1: Though I have already gave a comment, I guess I forgot to say how beautifully written your piece was. Sorry. Anyways, I love this.
thedramallama #4
Chapter 1: I'm...speechless at the moment. This is a really good story. Nice use of the bubblegum analogy. C:
Gyuhism #5
Chapter 1: He... remembers. Wow.

I really admire the girl. She still loved him, yet was strong enough to let both of them go because it would hurt them both if they continue hanging onto every remaining fragment of their shattered relationship.

This story is really amazing, and this is by far, the best oneshot I have ever read on AFF ever since I joined. I really love how the title is connected to the story, and how the opening was written: bubblegum; sweet at first, yet tasteless afterwards. Totally relatable. If I were to rate this fic, I would give it a blasting 100/10.

And no, I didn't miss out the last zero accidently.
Givaren #6
Chapter 1: I know people would say you should make a sequel, I don't think you have to (don't get mad at me people!) because it was the perfect ending. If you make a sequel, I would hope that maybe it's about them in the future, they both have moved on, and though they can't forget, they have already accepted their separation, because I really don't like sequels of angsty stories which have the plot-line of both of them meet each other and they start their relationship anew because they still can't forget each other, or it's like the same timeline , only in the guy's point of view. Though it's still gonna be your decision... I really hope you put into consideration my suggestion.
suju-elf4ever #7
Chapter 1: This is so sad! ):
chobaekho #8
Chapter 1: This is seriously good!! <3
Maybe you could write a sequel to this!
Adam97 #9
update soon!
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