At Death's Door

Description

 

Pearl: Innocent, cute, easily trusts people, optimistic.

 

Scarlet: Gorgeous, suspicious of everyone especially men with the exception of Pearl and B.A.P and expert at making people pissed off ( loves doing it ).

 

Tao: Playful, sweet, soft-hearted, knows how to fight, tries to act tough and has a badass look.

 

Sehun: Adorable, makes people around him happy without knowing it.

 

B.A.P: Yongguk, Yongjae, Jongup, Himchan, Daehyun and Zelo

 
And some other kpop stars that'll have minor or major parts :)

Foreword

    Two run-away girls that became assassins in order to get revenge when they suddenly become involved in a war between two kingdoms. On the way, they meet people that will change their lives forever. How many people will die in this journey?

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HeartsOfDiamonds #1
It's like they're 12 year olds. Your plot, sad to say, has nothing in common with the title.
anemone_x #2
Chapter 1: hey, i uhh new reader here.
the writing and grammar are okay but here are just some things you might want to take note of.

1. try not to switch p.o.v's too much. if you wish to show everyone's thoughts i suggest you write in a third's person pov.

2. be sure to keep your story logical. it's impossible for someone to be on the run for 6 hours straight without resting. unless you state that they have powers or some sort, if they do, do remember to state them clearly :) oh and if it's an old man, it should be 50+ not 35. that's middle aged :)
3. i have nothing against their ages, but then again. they have yet to mature, i don't think it's possible for them to have such sinister ideas in their heads. you might want to put yourself in the shoes of a traumatized 9 year old child.

other than that, i look forward to reading future chapters. ^^
update soon.
angelzs2 #3
Chapter 1: Young assassins are freaking scary.
matokki-babyz #4
Chapter 1: Wow! I love this story! but wait .. why are they so young? :o
angelzs2 #5
Dayum this sounds interesting! Except you can move either the plot/description or the characters to the foreword so that it doesn't seem a bit too messy?
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