& the SHADOWS cried...

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Because no one knew her pain like they did...

Foreword

The pain was delectable. She was hungry for the feel of the cold metal blade kissing her soft skin; starved for the sticky crimson that spilled across her flesh in it's wake. This was a feeling that she could control, painful and invigorating all at once. She'd tried overdosing before, as well as suffocation, but she never made it to the end. He always fixed her, only to break her more with that evil smile of his. The smile that pulled her back into his darkness and kept her there.

She slashed at her wrist again, pushing the blade deeper in, the thought of his face pushing her further. Blood poured from the self-inflicted wound, staining her tattered clothes. The lights dimmed and flickered in the room, and then she realized it was just her vision dimming. A lazy smile stretched across her face as her shoulders sagged - this was it. It was finally the end.

A.N- The sequel ^.^ I didn't really wanna do it, I just started typing randomly. Hopefully it'll be short so I can get through it quickly. Comments and subscribers and appreciated ^.^ I have an ending in mind but do you guys epect a happy ending? ARe you looking for romance in this story or the usual horror?

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linhlady87 #1 May 19, 2014 13:28:16

Chapter 2: Hi author! Are you still going to post chapter 3 up?

ilabya3 #2 May 10, 2014 02:57:03

interesting

angelheartsjae #3 Apr 17, 2011 15:49:35

oh gosh....she's been tryin to take her ownlife bcoz of Jae torment.... Jae's starting to gv me the creeps...only in ur story... ~.~ 
 
update...

legendariiphresh #4 Apr 15, 2011 17:11:33

Thanks for reading! I'll do... well close to my best, I guess lol. GD is awesome, never heard the song though ^.^

yummiliciouslove #5 Apr 5, 2011 02:05:12

YUSH!! a sequel!!! I really like the "obsessed love" it makes everything so scary and creepy but.... It has a sweet love feeling at the same time. Ya know what I mean?? Jaejoong's love is so deep that he never gives up and continues to follow her. No matter how much she hates him. This story reminds me of G-Dragon's song Obesesion :D LOOOVE that song (and him too hehe) <3

whydontyouQQ #6 Apr 2, 2011 20:52:47

I read this story back before I made my account, and I'm really glad you've hade a sequel! 
 
Personally, I enjoyed the sick erse horror that was in the last story (What does that say about me?) and think that it would fit well to tie it in with this one. So, I'm not partial to the idea of a real 'romantic' type story. 
 
Most importantly, I want to know more about the story and the characters that Dani developed while writing her book in highschool, and where she left off. Also, the point in time in her life when she left writing and how she ended up meeting with Nichkhun. He's a good guy through-out the entire story, and although grounding for Nadi, he seemed somewhat static to me, no offense intended. Using Jae and Khun, you created a good guy bad guy situation, but nothing really gre from that, other than Dani's insanity. We don't see a lot of character development, even though you set up the story to allow the characters to change Dani, everything is inconclusive (Which you intended, but I would have enjoyed some character developement in the end)Again, I don't mean offense, I just really enjoy the story. What I'm suggesting is rather drawn out, though. 
 
As for an ending, I feel that a happy ending would take away from the realistic feel of the story, and that as a piece of literature, it makes more sense to have an un-happy ending because not only does it fit more with the mood of the story (Or, the previous one, anyways) but it also makes the story more interpretive and captivating. 
 
Anyways, loved the story, and I'll be subscribing!

legendariiphresh #7 Apr 2, 2011 16:52:01

That made me grin! Thanks so for reading, and for your input! ^.^

angelheartsjae #8 Apr 2, 2011 16:18:06

wow...looks like i'm the first one here.....just wanna tell u i found ur story after u finished uploading the last chapter when i check for jae fic with the latest update.....n gal...u got me reading it whole night until i finished it....the supernatural thing just couldn't leave me alone...with Jae's violet eyes...wooo....it gives me the chills....hahha...here i am....at the sequel.... 
 
since there weren't any real story between Jae n Dani at the first part....i'd really like to know what really happened or what will happen between them in here....n honestly...i'm also a jae biased....so...i'd vote for some romance in this story... ^^ 
 
and abt the ending....hm...i'd prefer for the characters to have a happy ending....but since u said u already an ending in ur mind...the decision is ur hands whether to make it real for the story or not....lol.... 
 
will be waiting for ur update...bye ~