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A shop providing reviews for your fanfics! New fanfic reviewer, I just want more experience in reviewing.

enjoy requesting! ♥

Foreword

by requesting, you have read and agreed to all rules.

r u l e s.

• allow 3 weeks for your review to be completed

• always post up review somewhere on your fic after you received your review.

• please credit when posting up the review. (oneshootingstar_@aff)

• please comment after picking up your review, so i know you have received it.

e x t r a n o t e s.

• fics can be any rating, up to nc-17, is there anything above that? LOL.

• fic must have at least 5 chapters up before requesting, unless it is a oneshot or twoshot etc.

• rated fics are ok, but im not a huge fan of , so there will be a disadvantage to your fic if i review a fic. D:

• please be respectful, I will grade your fic the most honest way I can, no bashing intended.

 • please don't be hurt by my review, it is meant for you to improve, if you feel like my fic is too harsh, you may ask for me to redo.

• im still a new reviewer, so I make mistakes, please do tell me!

review rubric: /105

Title: /5

Poster/ Graphics / Trailers: /10

Introduction: /10

Flow of Story: /20

Writing Style: /10

Plot: /10

Originality: /15

Grammar: /20

Overall Enjoyment: /5

Bonus: (Only if I feel your score is too low) /5

Extras: (Total will change with each addition)

Ending: /20

Rated Scenes: /15

 

rubric:

90-100% = HOLY CRAP! This fic is A-MA-ZING. It can make my top 20 fic list.

80-89% = Extremely well written fic! You are doing an amazing job!

70 - 79% = Good job so far, keep it up, maybe some inspiration will give you fic a boost

60 - 69% = Your fic is ok, more practice will help you improve!

0 - 59% = Hold on there, don’t rush while writing, take your time to think it through before writing! Your writing needs some improvement.

 

 

review form:

fanfic name:

author:

link:

genre:

rating (G, PG, PG-13, ETC.)

summary:

number of chapters:

 

 

 

 reviews:

1) 30 steps to quitting Jonghyun by cutterpillow (DONE)

2) The Genius and The Jock by ThatGirlOverThere (Status: Accepted)

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JUMins #1
Fanfic name: Just for revenge or love?

Author: JUMins

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/137874/just-for-revenge-or-love-2pm-chansung-junho-junsu-nichkhun-taecyeon-wooyoung

Genre: Romance Drama

Rating: PG 13

Summary: SME organized a program for kpop stars to get together. Last time it was f(x) and SNSD. But this time, it 's rookie star Jung You Min And beastly idols 2PM. And what will happen, When 2PM falls in love with her?

Number of chapters: 9
onewjjang #2
Hi I would like to request a review from you. :)<br />
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fanfic name: I Won't Let Go<br />
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author: onewjjang<br />
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link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/49024<;br />
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genre: Romance, comedy, drama, fluffy<br />
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rating: PG-13<br />
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summary: An unexpected meeting in an unexpected way with an unexpected girl on a beach one day had knocked some sense into Onew's heart to start loving once again.<br />
But with the two parties' clueless head about each others' feelings, nothing more could happen without the help of two best friends from each sides. The once simplest thing like giving your best friends a hand for their love life, would suddenly lead to various occurrence in the future.<br />
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number of chapters: 20
jaeejin #3
anfic name: double shot<br />
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author: Natalia aka jaeejin<br />
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link: http://bit.ly/iA2n9l<br />
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genre: romance, <br />
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rating: PG -17<br />
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summary: Kira, a new worker in a photography agency, begins to fall in love with her boss. She doesn't realize he has a boyfriend and is gay. Soon enough the 3 of them get a closer relationship. How will it end?<br />
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number of chapters: 5
jaycobisl #4
How do you rate a story? like how do you know if it's a PG-15 or a ..... PG-0??
fastpvce #5
fanfic name: Raptured Butterfly. Rapping or RapButt if you must.<br />
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author: mishtricx18<br />
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link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/37554<;br />
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genre: fantasy, action, romance<br />
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rating: PG 15<br />
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summary: A prophecy has hope of coming true. Lives are at stake, the whole world will lie in ruins. Gods from ancient times will grace the Earth, save it from the traitor amongst those they created. Only one human can save the world but what if feelings get in the way? What will she choose: life remaining on Earth or true love that can never be found again? (was too azy to wrie a summary XDD)<br />
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number of chapters: 3 so far. The other chapter was only for information.
oneshootingstar_ #6
Hi guys!<br />
you guys must hate me for taking forever on these reviews! i promise to finish them quickly ^^;;
perfakkai #7
fanfic name: I’ll Always Remember You<br />
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author: cute_gurlz98<br />
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link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/35737/i-ll-always-remember-you-oneshot-sad-taemin<;br />
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genre: sad, angsty<br />
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rating: G<br />
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summary: Taemin and Hwa Young had been dating for years now. But when one day Hwa Young was involved in a terrible accident and lost her life, Taemin was devastated.<br />
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number of chapters: 1 (oneshot)
sharehappyness #8
fanfic name: The Name I Loved<br />
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author: sharehappyness / Hee<br />
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link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/33172/the-name-i-loved-drama-leejinki-onew-romance-shinee<;br />
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genre: Romance, Drama<br />
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rating (G, PG, PG-13, ETC.)G<br />
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summary: 'The Name I Loved' shares the tale of a man facing the hardship to move on, the anxiety to live forward and waking up for his reality.<br />
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number of chapters: 25 <br />
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Thank you!! ^^
edsheeran #9
fanfic name: My Five Year Old Girlfriend<br />
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author: nanachirisuu<br />
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link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/20966/my-five-year-old-girlfriend-jonghyun-shinee-taemin-taeyeon<;br />
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genre: romance, comedy, tragedy (only a bit)<br />
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rating PG<br />
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summary: For Nana, a stubborn, cute and childish girl, life is anything but easy. She lives alone in a flat, and the only person that's as close as her family would be her rich neighbour, Taemin.<br />
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Taemin. A 17 year-old billionaire. He has been friends with Nana since they were younger. He's always had feelings for her, but he's obnoxious and stubborn. What can he do when he finds out that his sweet and strong hearted neighbour gets in a car accident and loses her memory? Now Nana thinks she's a five year old, and she's living by herself. That can only mean one thing... she'll have to move in with Taemin! <br />
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But there's another problem.. Taemin's secretly been living with hot hurricane Jonghyun! What can happen to the two when they have to look after Nana?<br />
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number of chapters: 7<br />
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thanks in advance ! :)
cutterpillow #10
pick up my review! Thanks :) posted the link on forewords (for the mean time)
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