Final

Secret Admirer

HOREEEEE!! (means YAAAAAAAY! in bahasa)

it's finally ended,

i wanna to thanked everyone who read my fics, and subcribers, LOVE YOU

p.s: i felt bad for making my subscribers and readers wait for long time for this short story, so i put my own edit, hope you guys like it :D

 

 

Onew's side


I’m bored, well if you say that I have to munch my chicken, forget it, I'm not in the mood, I'm still feeling like a poop, telling Shoo what she would say about my feeling, I'm so stupid, I shouldn't have to said that to her, should I sing big bang new song?

I'm so stupid, i'm so stupid, yeaaahh~~

Okay this is lame, I decided to find someone to talk with while my phone are faar away from me because I don’t want to text Shoo, everytime I open the screenlock, there will be Shoo picture which I’ve took it, it was the first time I saw her, she was alone, sitting on a school bench looking for nothing, just day dreaming, she looks really beautiful, and I fell for her because of it. See? Now I’m thinking about her, okay, It’s still 4 pm and bored, so I’m turning on my ipad, and start to check my messenger, then I saw my buddy, Minho. I started new chat with him ;

CHonewICKEN : Yo! Ma mino

well he didnt looks bud, i pressed the nudge button ;

CHonewICKEN : *Nudge*
Min-ho : man, what was that?
Min-ho : i could smell that youre bored
Min-ho : *sarcastic emoticon*
CHonewICKEN : how did you know? *open mouth emoticon*
Min-ho : i know you really well my buddy
Min-ho : can i ask you a question?

CHonewICKEN : you just did that,
CHonewICKEN : LOLOL got ya,

Min-ho : this is serious dude,
   

Min-ho : I know you will hate me for this, but

Min-ho : I’ve talked to Shoo, and I told her everything

CHonewICKEN : YOU TOLD HER YOU STILL LIKE HER?

CHonewICKEN : YOU’RE SO DEAD MINHO
CHonewICKEN : DIE! DIE YOU! WHAT KIND OF FRIEND ARE YOU?

CHonewICKEN : YOU TOLD ME THAT YOU WILL STEP ASIDE AND LET ME!!!!

Min-ho : Slow down bro, I told her abt you

CHonewICKEN : YOU.GO.DIE!

CHonewICKEN : WHAAAT???!!!

CHonewICKEN : Good, now I’m ready to die, thanks Mino

Min-ho : No, no, no

Min-ho : don’t die first bud, she said she will wait you to come tonight,

 

I jumped from my seat, MINHO YOU KIDDN ME R8??!!

 

Min-ho : She still want to think about it

Min-ho : you should thank me

Min-ho : And she hates tardiness 

CHonewICKEN : WOW

CHonewICKEN : I mean wow, sorry caps still on, you’ve shocked me

CHonewICKEN : Really?

CHonewICKEN : I don’t know what to say bud

CHonewICKEN : thanks bud.. *kiss emoticon*

 

Min-ho : Thank god this is just messenger 

CHonewICKEN : Soo, see ya, I have to go..

 

 

I logged out from the messenger, and run to bath room, and get dressed, I never thought she will think about it. Well the concert will be around 7, I should get going now.

 

Writer side

 

6:30pm

 

Shoo is already inside the concert building, she was wearing skinny jeans, with far east movement t shirt, with biker leather vest, with white converse. Actually, she wants to wear ankle boots, but the heels will make her unable to enjoy the concert. She made tidy ponytail, and gold bangles on her arm. She keep looking on her watch, ‘I’m too excited, I shouldn’t have be this early, but far east song are awesome, okay, this is not a big deal. Where the hell is this chicken boy? Should I text him?’. She pulled out her phone, but then she put her phone back, ‘No, no, no, no, he will think I’m too impatient, okay I’ll pretend that I’m not come early.’ She thought. ‘But I’m alone, ohmy god! What should I do?’ she stomped her foot like confused little girl. Suddenly she felt like someone tapped her back. She turned her body, and saw a familiar figure. Onew. She never thought onew will look good in casual clothing. She couldn’t explain but Onew looks really handsome. He wore same far east t-shirt with grey blazer and skinny.

“Hey.” he greeted her, “I never thought you’ll be earlier.”

“Eh? I’ve just arrived.” She lied.

“Really?” he put playful-sarcastic face, “I saw you from few minutes ago.” He said.

“Fine, I’ve been here since 6.30, I’ve being earlier because I can’t wait for this concert.” She confessed. Onew couldn’t help but smile. She’s looks pretty in that ponytail.

“why you won’t stay inside? The door already open 5 minutes ago.” Onew said.

‘Damn, it’s is, what happen to me today?’ she thought.

“come on, lets go!” Onew pulled her.

“Wait! Onew, I want to talk about this morning.” She pulled back Onew’s hand.

“what happened this morning? I didn’t remember.” He said with serious tone, “Come on the concert is about to start.” He said pulling Shoo’s arm.

‘Great, now he’s pretending nothing happened this morning.’

The concert haven’t started. Onew got the 2nd row from the stage which made Shoo more excited. But the thought about this boy beside her won’t be fading. She couldn’t believe that Onew is the guy who saved her. The guy who fell deeply into her. She never felt this loved. She really want to accept Onew, but it’s too fast for her to accept him, but she know that Onew will be loved her with his heart. She still confused. She took a deep breath and realized that Onew watching her.

“So, Shoo, can I know what are you thinking right now?” he asked. He thought she’s sick.

“No-Nothing.” She said. She felt bad to him. Even Onew already told her to forget about the Secret admirer stuff, but she couldn’t forget it.

Finally the concert are about to start, the crew play the record about what the concert rules, but Onew decided to go to the restroom.

“Shoo, I’m going to the bathroom okay? Bladder problem, I’ll be back.” He said rushing.

Shoo only nod. From the seat Shoo could see Onew running with all his might to the door. She giggled. ‘He’s funny.’ But she didn’t know that Onew is going somewhere else.

 

“And Now before we starting the show, please welcome our opening performance!”.

‘They have opening performance? Who?’ She checked her ticket, and was opened. The bottom right corner, written,

“ONEW!” the narrator voice, followed with crowd claps. Then a figure coming from the stage. A man with all white – white blazer, white tie, white shirt, and white trousers, also with white shoes.

“Hello, My name is Onew,” he said with his signature smile “before we starting the show, I would like to help you guys warming up.” Everyone started to clapped and shout their hand after heard the familiar intro. Stand by me, the boys before flower themesong.

“This song is for the girl who made my life brighter than usual, well she’s not my girlfriend, but I’m glad she still can smile.” Shoo felt like her heartbeat being rushed. ‘Onew is a singer? I didn’t knew that. And he sing for me?’

He started to sing :

stand by me
look towards me
even though I don’t know love yet
stand by me
guard over me
because I am still clumsy at love

my feelings get better as I look at you
I find myself randomly singing
I even want to buy a single rose
The side of myself is so new
As my heart becomes closer to you
The world become more beautiful
If you feel my nervousness
Will you wait just a little bit?

Forever making love
Forever making you smile
Filled with your bright smile
Forever making love
Forever making you smile
Now hold my hands
Stand by me
Look towards me
Even though I don’t know love yet
Stand by me guard over me
Because I am still clumsy at love

The more I get to know you, my heart quivers
All I can do is smile
Shall I try to kiss you?
Will it get me a little closer to your heart?
Could this feeling be love
Im still shy
I haven’t even taken a single step to you
So please wait for my love

together making love
Forever making you smile
Filled with your bright smile
Together making love
forever making you smile
I will slowly heat towards you step by step
Stand by me
Look at me
Somehow, I want to be closer to you
Stand by me
Guard over me
I want to seem a bit cooler to you

I don’t know at first
How to begin to love
I still don’t know my heart
But I love you

together making love
Forever making you smile
Filled with your bright smile
Together making love
forever making you smile
now hold my hands
Stand by me
Look towards me
Even though I don’t know love yet
Stand by me guard over me
Because I am still clumsy at love

the song ended and the far east movement member coming from the back,

“And now please welcome our FAR EAST MOVEMENT!” Onew said with screaming the band name. Kev did hi five with Onew followed with other members, and they thanked him and let Onew go to the backstage which for changing clothes and join Shoo.

“Soo, howzit?” he grinned

“I never knew you could sing.” She said. Onew only smiled and enjoy the song. But Shoo didn’t do the same, she look at Onew, and give him deep look. ‘Okay, I’m going to say it.’ She tapped Onew shoulder to make him look at her. She signed him to lower his head to make her easier to whisper because the concert was in loud mood.

“Onew, I think I like you.”

She backed to her position while Onew still look the same disbelieved. Then he smiled. He signed her to come closer, Shoo thought he’s going to tell her something but he didn’t. Onew kissed her cheek.

END

 

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kimchijan #1
@starlove : dont be, you can read this whenever you want :)
starlove
#2
awwwww....<br />
soo cute!!!<br />
they finally kow it now!!!<br />
ima miss reading this!! :(
kimchijan #3
@ohmysweetheart : i want to make that tooo! but i dont know the exact feeling :p<br />
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@iloveniel17 : :) thanks A LOOOOTTTTT for reading :)
ohmysweetheart #4
LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIPPPPPPPPPPPPPSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!<br />
It could've been the lips. ;).<br />
LOL. I'm such a .<br />
YAAAAAAY. Happy endingg!!!
kimchijan #5
please wait patiently :D i'll promise, before monday i will end this fics :)
kimchijan #6
@aruzza : hehe, it's my first time writing fics, so it's a bit awkward for me :)<br />
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@ohmysweetheart: I love you too, hehe, i made him that way, i like that kind of guy :p<br />
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@starlove : i will dear, but i'm not sure when i will update >A<
starlove
#7
awwwww..<br />
Onew dont give up!!<br />
she'll give you a chance!!!!<br />
lol..he did all that and still didnt tell her then!!!<br />
update soon please
ohmysweetheart #8
Aww. I love you. <3.<br />
I love Onew! :D. he's just...so shy and cute! :D<br />
aruzza #9
ah, i'm glad you make the font size smaller now. easier to read [: