Chapter 1: normally I'd demand a sequel from my favourite pieces of writing, but I feel a continuation wouldn't quite work out well with this. Of course, I want more; so much more, but this is perfect as it is.
Thank you. I loved it.
(merry Christmas!)
Chapter 1: thought Ji was gonna join him or something...i can't believe the utter angst in this piece of writing TT-TT to stay in Korea, knowing that the maknae he loves is alive and well, in the U.S...to have to lie to everyone...omg! and this is so well written too, i love the kinda flashbacks through the steps of making the plan, unorganised scenes that each told a piece of the puzzle, till finally, at the end, it all fell into place. beautifully.heartbreaking.love it.
Chapter 1: Was also confused at first, but then it clicked. OMG. ;__; I want to print this out and keep it~ X3 So much lovveee for this little one-shot. Great job, authornim. ;A; This was really beautiful~
Chapter 1: I was confused at first, tbh, but towards the end, the little tidbits and incidents came together to reveal the whole picture. Beautifully done! So unique!
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