Xiumin's Brother (discontinued)

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              ok hey guys this is a Xiumin fanfic i absolutely love Xiumin and i became very depressed when i saw he didn't have a fanfic. i mean hes adorable. but ok this is about a couple girls that meet this guys who happens to be Xiumin's brother. and yeah. thats the gist of it so far.

             Lee  Ha Nul- loves anything that has to do with art. youngest

      Park Min Ah-  slightly lazy. 

              Kim Jun Su- Xiumin's half-brother, year younger than Xiumin and 2 months older than Min Ah. gay. very outgoing when you get to know him. very distant at the beginning. afraid of being used. loves music. supports brother, (likes Exo K more) overall a nice sweet guy.

Foreword

(a/n hey um ittalicizted is mandrian, and regluar is korean, bold is English, sorry too lazy to look up phrases.<3)

Ha Nul POV

walking into the new school i'm going to, i glance around.

"Waaa!" i mutter to myself. "this place is huge! i'm definantly going to get lost i look around. all the other students are meeting with other students. they obviously all know each other. i gulp and turn to go up the stairs. sitting there is a guy. hes really cute, but for some reason he looks sad, happy, angry, and indifferent all at once. i've never seen anything like it. hoping he won't be a mean person i walk over to him, pulling out my precious camera as i go. i stand in front of him.

"e-excuse me." i stutter. he glances up."i w-was wondeering i-if i could t-take a picture of you?" he looks at me suspiously.

"why?" i gulp.

"w-well its because, i-i s-saw you f-from over there and i th-thought you looked c-cool, so i was just wondering...." i trail off and blush. he stares at me. i turn.

"never mind." i go to walk away.

"wait." he calls after me. i pause and turn my head so can see him.

"um, go ahead." i sigh. i pull the cap off lens and put it up to my eye. he looks at me quizzically.

"do you want me to pose or anything?" he asks. i shake my head.

"just sit there and think about whatever you were thinking about before i came over here." he tilts his head, and his face became once more the mix of emotions that intriqued me so. i quickly snap a picture. i then, bow.

"thank you very much!" i chirp."ooops i mean, thank you!" he chuckles.

"welcome. by the way my name is...."he begins, but is interrputed by a very entergetic girl. she runs up to us.

"hi, i'm Min Ah. i'm going to be your best friend." she says. "both of yours." the boy and i exchange curious glances.

"um, i'm Kim Jun Su." the boy says. both of them then look at me.

"my name is Lee Ha Nul." i murmer. Min Ah beams. 

"nice to meet you Ha Nul and Jun Su! anyways we're going to be late for class so we better get going.!" she drags Jun Su up onto his feet, makes me hook arms with him and marches off to class, talking the whole way. i glance over to the side.

i've haven't even gone to class and i've already made two friends. i look down at my camera still in my hands and smile.

 


Hey everyone.... i haven't updated this for too long. i have no motivation to finish this so i'm discontinuing this. at the end of the week i'm deleting this story. i just thought it would be good to let you guys know.

-Vixxen-
i am a horrible person.

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Exoticsone2500
#1
Chapter 12: Omo great chapter :D LOOOOOOVE THIS CUTE STORY
bl2022 #2
Chapter 12: Update soon
!!!
-Tigress-
#3
Looks cute!!! And you're right, there aren't enough XiuMin stories on here. =)
sherilynrenee
#4
its SO GOOD OMG. Ive been busy for a while! I miss you, facebook me! AND UPDATE
bl2022 #5
Chapter 7: Update soon. PS check your grammar I'm kinda confused. Is there going to be ?
NiKhao #6
Chapter 2: ah awesome ! just imagine being friends with xiumin's brother oh god *____* /faints/
this chapter was great ! i can't wait for them all to meet up~
NiKhao #7
Chapter 1: Wah ! I think the plot seems really interesting !
And I love the characters too~ It's a great start to a Xiumin fic and I'll support it all the way through~
Well done on the first chapter ! Super excited for the next parts to come n___n