Chapter 1: I love unexpected encounters like this there is sth very exciting abt it

Chapter 1: It's awesome! Very sweet~~
Hope you keep writing SeKai <3

Chapter 1: * A* perfect as always!

Chapter 1: I love this fiction!!!!!
It seems like they're destined to each other xD
one thing though your words are too close like you should press more enters so there can be some spaces so it's easier to reas

you know what I mean? sorry for my bad English T^T

Chapter 1: OMG I'm dead. Kai and Sehun's hot scene~ *O* ...which should've been a hehehe. >D

Chapter 1: this is golden
dude
when sehun thinks about his parents is my favorite scene

saw ya gonna write a sequel for this
cannot wait
cough sehun bottoms right coughs

fighting dude

Chapter 1: HEY, this is my first fanfic and I'm in love with it *~* You did SUCH an amazing job! I told you you can do it! Your word choices were very well choosen as well :D Wahhh~ you're just so talented >.< I don't understand why you ever doubted yourself! Just, wow.<3

Chapter 1: You're doing a great job. Don't worry. It is nicely written :D
You know what, Sehun is probably my ultimate muse in EXO, Jongin and Baekhyun next, though I love all of them. But it always easiest to me to write Jongin's POV than Sehun's. Maybe because I tend to have better imagination on Sehun :D.
Wow, this comment is long, LOL

Chapter 1: Aww this is great!
You should make the continuation!!!

where's the chapter authornim D: