You're Mine!

Description

In which Kyuhyun loses his mind and a Fire burns red and Yesung accepts that somethings you can't fight against, whilst dealing with a troublesome Kyuhyun.

Foreword

I hate odd numbers----38.

Only posting this so I would feel guilty enough to edit the stupid story.

If you read these things, you sort of know what to expect. It's going to be lots of fun.

Yeah.

Not even going to ask for comments.

Cheers.

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TheFanFicHoeX
#1
Chapter 2: Hahahaha who is that guy trying to free himself from the costume in the middle gif? LOL! Anyway, author-nim! Good job again. Writing was good. Plot though, I just hope Yeye becomes more open and liberated - kissing wise hahaha! I want Yeye to actually start and be more sensual towards Kyu. I feel like it is always Kyu who tries and be more intimate with him. My heart breaks for Kyu everytime. But hell, I still always want to see him be that possesive and very much in love Kyuhyun! Haha
JayJayELF
#2
Chapter 1: I know i say this in every one of your stories but awwwwwww so cute!!!! Possessive Kyu is the best!!! Yesung being himself oblivious.
359359
#3
Possessive Kyu is the greatest isn't he? (or maybe that's just me haha) Gosh, Yesung needs to stop being such an oblivious idiot.. but I guess that's what I adore about him. Besides he will always have Kyu to set him straight XD. As always this fic was somethingthousand words of pure fangirl worthy amazingness (I've literally read it like 3 times now XD) and is one of my favorites. You always manage to make everything so real, every emotion they feel, I feel while reading and it makes the fic 100x more engaging. So that you and your type savvy hands and creative mind for stirring up this plot. : )
fishyyy #4
its beautiful! definitely worth procrastinating on college apps for XD no seriously i read this while trying to apply early, so i couldn't leave a comment earlier and my computer had broken down, argh... BUT anyway, i loved this story! it broke my heart, and i almost started crying but then i read your little a/n and lol'd. anyway im not very good with words but let me just say your my favorite author on this site, i love your style and i want to squish yeye and kyu even more after reading these stories! and i want to hug you too for being awesome :) thanks for posting!
ice420 #5
It took me some time but here I am :D Your avid fan and reader. Have I ever missed one story? Pfft, I doubt it. You know how I'll miss your stories *wails*

I love your jealous Kyu! He's sooo, aarrgghh!! I'm like Yeye; lovin the intensity of Kyu's love rather than be scared by it. It's quite flattering and feeds the soul and heart to have someone love you like that. Can I have your Kyu? I just love him being a 'baby' Koala, soo adorable! I don't think anyone could get mad at that. OMG, the tongue!! *lol* I thought Yeye would be getting into it for a bit but then shyness kicked in and he had to pull back ^^ shoot, missed chance for 'french' *winks*

Again, your writing was A+. The emotions running through Kyu, I could just believe it. It's a wonder how he didn't snap on the spot. His possessive tendencies is kinna scary though I am glad he loves Yeye soo much that he can rein it in. You know, with the way their love story is going, I wonder how both of them don't have white hairs yet. All that emotional rollercoaster, that stress, omfg o.o I don't wanna think how the enlistment is gonna treat them. And they haven't addressed other issues yet. And you're gonna quit? Noo!!!! *pulls you* I still need to see them running towards the end of the rainbow holding hands and happy that they've finally got their happily ever after!!!

Okay.. calming down. You threw Yeye's favorite dongsaengs in, Yey!! I love Hyukkie's thoughts, Hae's childish innocence and of course, Siwon's particular brand of Yeye sweetness :D I just adore them to bits.

Please please, I don't know what I'm begging to actually but.. I guess you know. I love your stories. I love KyuSung. I love their reality through your fictions. What more can I say?
Harley_Quinn
#6
Chapter 2: This is my first time commenting on a story. >.< But honestly your one of my favorite authors and I've been an avid reader of your continuum. So I only feel its fair I tell you how much I enjoy the way you write my precious Kyusung. From their personality traits I find so accurate, to the way they interact with each other, *I do love a blushing Yesung* and even, *though it is frustrating at times, damn you adorable blushing Yesung* how slow and natural you make the pace of their relationship. It's sweet and fluffy and actually makes me smile at points. Going back to re-read a portion when I finally stop squealing and I do hope you continue because honestly I look forward to your stories when you post them. You’re an excellent writer and I do think it's very special when you can read a story and be able to forget about everything else except that story for the few hours you’re reading it.
Alyneko #7
Chapter 2: I don't normally comment, but I'll make an exception today! Thank you for posting this, it was very beautifully written. Although, it's my first time commenting on one of your stories, I must confessed to having read every single one of them with great attention, so please keep posting your fics. I always love the way you describe the love between Kyuhyun and Yesung, and how their relationship evolves. And I won't lie and say I didn't like possessive Kyuhyun.
Thank you for posting and don't stop writing (or I'll be very sad)
lahdeedah000 #8
Chapter 2: (cont.)...I get a bit lazy when commenting sometimes, (today's a bit of an exception) but I'd gladly write to the max number of characters for a comment every single time if it means we can continue to get these beautiful, amazing, magnificent stories. I think I'll actually cry if you only write two more.... :( So, keep writing and posting! <3

Oh, and I love all the gifs, and that little comic. ;)
lahdeedah000 #9
Chapter 2: Ahhhhhhh this was so freaking adorable! Seriously, jealous!Kyu is just so much fun! >:D Haha and I absolutely love how oblivious Donghae is. Like Hyuk said on strong heart when they were talking about their big fight, Donghae just can't seem to read the atmosphere, can he? xD Actually, during the first part (Chapter 1) I was hoping the entire time that a couple of the members would walk in on them, because I figured their reactions would be priceless. And voila that's exactly what you gave me in the second part! Me was happy... :3

And GAH the kissing! The KISSING! Just, just asldfkjalskdfjalsdkffffasdfea! Because of you, now I REALLY like jealous Kyu, because that surely wouldn't have happened otherwise, would it? I love how their level of intimacy is going up, although slowly. Once again really realistic, especially when they get shy or feel slightly awkward. Like a "really well written fanfiction" indeed. ;)

Kekekeke I also love shy!Kyu, I have to mention. The whole "because you're mine" part was just pure sweetness. Love is about having a big heart, but it's also childish and petty sometimes.

NOooooooooooooooo YESUNGIE DON'T GO TO THE ARMY! PLEASE! ;_; Seriously, every time I think of that, I just want to cry. I can't listen to a single suju song (that he sings in) without hearing his beautiful adlibs in the background at some point in the song. Kyu can sing those just as easily, I know, but there's a reason why Yeye's got the majority of those. I just, I can't imagine it....

.....whoops, sorry got a bit sidetracked there. So, just all in all that army part almost got me to cry. I was pretty darn close. >.<

On a happier note, a good 'ol pillow fight is always nice. You had me grinning like a fool. You make me do that a lot, actually... xD

Please, please PRETTY please never stop posting these beautiful stories. They brighten my day when I read them, and to be honest, I really need every bit of brightening I can get these days. To be honest...(tbc)
siana-chan #10
Chapter 1: It was perfect ! Like ever. But no it was even more than perfect !

It was hot too O.O I Soooo loved the paragraphs describing their kisses, french kisses and kinkiness. Really hothothot, Kyuhyun's just awesome and bold, and Yesung's just so nice but playing as well. Both are rising their attractiveness, MWAHAHAHA FINALLY. It's slow, but it's welcomed, I like it this way.

Seriously I would be a mix of Kyuhyun and Yesung, Dominant when dealing with Yesung, Shy when dealing with Kyuhyun xD

<3 you midnight~!