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Then it hits him. He's jealous.

Foreword

I really want to continue this, but I'll be honest; I don't know when I will update.

I had this idea in my head and it wanted out.

It's only my second story ever. All I can think of when writing is : Damn, I wish English was my native language! :)

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wheysup #1
Chapter 1: Joining everyone else to say, yes please continue! I love this so so so much. When GD tweeted those photos of Jolie and Gaho and someone on tumblr drew attention to the fact that the furniture in the Jolie pic was Scandinavian furniture (which TOP collects) and that the exterior of the building in the Gaho pic looks like the outside of TOP's villa, all I wanted in this world was fic about it. And what you've written here is everything I wanted and more <33333333333333. "The talk felt overdue somehow, like it belonged in a different time and place, like they should have had it ages ago. There were suddenly so many things he wanted to say to Seunghyun, about his new songs, about Jolie and other things too. He had a feeling Seunghyun felt the same." THIS IS JUST. "But now he feels awkward, unsure." I'M JUST. ""Hi. I'm glad you came." There is too much sincerity in Seunghyun's voice and Jiyong has to break their eye contact." I AM DYING. And the last paragraph, SHUT UP. I can't begin to tell you how excited I am about this fic. You really pegged their personalities and dynamic and that is just so rare in GTOP fic that I just want to shake your hand or twirl you around or something I don't know. And and andddd I love all the heavy pauses and important little moments and SH touching his nose to Jolie's and JY wanting to take a picture and keep it forever and SH laughing because he knew JY would notice the clock etc etc etc. "And then it hits him. He's jealous." I WILL BEG FOR A SECOND CHAPTER. I WILL.
Waterr #2
Chapter 1: Really really really good! Please continue :D
obsidiansapphire #3
Chapter 1: I hope you continue :) I'd also like a picture of Seunghyun playing with Jolie but I guess my imagination will have to do ;)
prodexoxo #4
Chapter 1: This is so great! I can't wait to see where this goes. Jiyong realizing that he's jealous of John seems so real. I love this story already! Great job!
xprsso #5
Chapter 1: this is really good !
Pls pls continue
gumwood #6
The first chapter is so promising, I really hope you'll continue! Your writing has great flow and the dialogue is so natural and believable.
Atenais #7
Chapter 1: Oh my God, I loved this first chapter. You have to keep with this story. From your first chapter I can see you know about them, and I'm always glad when I see these details that make the story more believable. And your style is clean and precise. Really, you have to keep up with this.
Thank you so much! I'll be waiting your next update.
kpopluver121 #8
Chapter 1: Wow this is good
jealous jiyong is cute :D
Cant wait for the next chap x
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