By the Skin of Our Teeth

Description

Jonghyun is living a hard life in a bad part of the city and his problems only seem to be getting bigger. The other people he meets seem to have as bad, if not worse problems than him. Taemin is a young homeless boy that is almost as bad at taking care of himself as Jonghyun. Time is running out as winter aproaches.

 

Warning! Jonghyun-centric, mentions of abuse, self-harm, drinking, violence, gangs, and there may be cursing in some chapters (but not much).

 

Pairings will most likely be Jongho with a side of platonic Jongtae. Might be keytae or taekey, maybe onkey.

Foreword

Jonghyun pulled the drain out of the tub after a few minutes and rubbed his hair dry and slipped into some loose-fitting ripped jeans and an old sweatshirt; then walked down the long hall to his bedroom. The house was almost totally dark Jonghyun wondered if it was just as dark where ever his father was. In his room he grabbed the feather duvet from the bed and tugged it around himself as he walked into the room across from his. The walls were peach colored but in the half-light he was reminded of washed out color of blood in the bathtub. He shook the memories from his head and scooted under the lone bed in the room. It was dark under there and smelt dusty. The duvet formed a weighty cocoon around him that fought off the cold in the house; there was so rarely oil enough to heat the house.

Jonghyun breathed in, and then let it out allowing the pounding in his body fade as sleep overtook him.

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simplyfanfiction #1
It's been three years. When are you updating?
Blingbling_luv
#2
Omigoodness please update soon!
STAR0408
#3
Chapter 4: jjong TT

please getting well
an angel is coming...........
FlamingFrog
#4
Chapter 3: Whoever Key roommate is, I'm excited tO see him ;) O think I'll like Key's character here, like any other fics I've read. He's just too awesome! ;D
MememememeME #5
Chapter 2: Hmm at first I thought that the kind man might be Onew but I read the other comments and they think it could be Minho, which I guess it could be :) but anyway I'm loving the story so I just go an subscribe now XD update soon ^^
FlamingFrog
#6
Is the weird, kind man Minho?? Lol Taemin's such a nice kid, Jjong should listen to him and go to that place ;)
KriKri #7
Chapter 2: AAAAAAAAH! The update! Yay! I was actually extremely happy to see this haha.
Jonghyun should have taken Taemin's advice right away. :( The house sounds like a great place! GO JJONG GO!

I love the deductive skills jonghyun uses to figure out how long taemin has been there- not many writers actually place that in their stories ( the other characters curiousity I mean)
Taemin is so angelic <3 and I can just imagine him peaking out from behind the trash bin~ so cute!
Jonghyun should have put away that pride and received the help the poor boy had given him. Or atleast asked for an address of the strange-helpers-house! He's way to injured not too!!!!!!!!!

On another note. Have you ever seen HEY ARNOLD? There was the character stoop kid and that kept popping in my mind when you talked about the strange-helpful-man in the strange-helping-house.

By the way, is the strange-helpful-man Minho? Or does he play a different part in this story?
I'm sorry my comments are so long.
You're really good at annoying cliffhangers xD
I can't wait for another update!

Krikri
KriKri #8
Chapter 1: Woah! Taemin is either a huge idiot or too much curiosity for his own good xD
AAaaanyways! Your writing is amazing! I love the flow- the way the story moves along! Taemin.... He should call someone !!!
I really liked your probably -not- on- purpose characterization. Taemin deciding to hide in a trashcan to prptect the stranger shows he is very naive in thinking! Someone with more experience in this situation or something most likely would have called the police and left or have urgently tended to the wounds ( I would have called the police but still stayed there FYI)

I can't wait for an update! I want to know more about what happens!

Krikri