The Crush

Description

To keep all the fantasy, all the beautiful things that go through her mind, Shin Haemi decides to never talk to her crush. But what she doesn't know is, that everything could have been even more beautiful, if only the crush does not merely stay a fantasy.

Foreword

All girls imagine. I do too.

It has been quite a long time since the last time I had a crush on anyone, so here I am in front of my laptop, fingers tapdancing on the keyboard, reminiscing the feelings I believe I had when butterflies used to visit my stomach so often.

We all can relate.

Author's Thoughts
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redeemedamethyst27 #1
Chapter 3: baekhyun can you not?? XD how i wish i am just another nornal girl to have a crush on someone outside the kpop world haha
green_teax #2
Chapter 3: So.. beautiful.
Every sentence, every word you used is very magical. I can even feel through Haemi's fantasy, haha. ^^
The plot was nothing less than elegant. I can't help but impressed by your efforts into writing.

By the way, you put (,) at the ends of some dialogues. Example: "The bus is coming,"
It's the end of the paragraph so you should put (.) instead. Same goes to: "I insist," "Get on," "I go by bus," etc.
Well, hope I helped! ^^
kpopgirl123 #3
Wow, I love it! :)
It's really well written and not cliche either!! ^^
Un1c0rns #4
Chapter 2: KEEP UPDATING PLEASEEEEEEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEEEE
Larkrise #5
Chapter 2: Oooh, he's actually talking to her?! Can't wait to read more, I love your style of writing it's really good :)
Un1c0rns #6
Chapter 1: Ooh I like, update soon!
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