Chapter 16: Author, I suggest you edit all chapters here. You need to put spaces and if it's possible paragraph. To be truth, I could not understand what are you trying to write at all. You mixed both, and you need to specify the time when the incident happens. You should put teasers in different paragraph. I hope you can edit your story and make it easier for people to read and understand your story.
I'm sorry if there are some sentences or words that opposed you. Thank you
Chapter 35: Hahaha so funny Henry was like "oh appa wants to make another baby ...dammit okay uncle hae let's go aish these parents of mine" hahaha but omo Henry don't you know what stranger danger is?
Chapter 35: Omg hae became a evil person now....henry don't go with him...maybe hyuk need to show hae the DNA reports then he will believe he's not his son I guess
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