Clumsy Tumbly

Description

Arisa discovers a different part of Jaejoong no girl would have ever expected.

Foreword

His face really is perfect.

 

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Chocolatemushrooms #1
:))
littlepenguins #2
This is really cute! ㅋㅋㅋ.. I liked it!
Emberlyn #3
This was so sweet :D and it had Jaejoong so yay :D .. I like your writing here .. did you intentionally style it differently than IDNB? It seems different to me .. maybe a little calmer too. But I likes it :D Here's a couple structural switches you could make if you wanted for flow:<br />
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“people opening up the path” .. “people stepped back as we approached, opening up a pathway”<br />
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“He stumbled carrying me over to what seemed like his bands backstage room’s…couch. “ .. “He stumbled, carrying me over to what appeared to be his band’s backstage-room couch.”<br />
boojae_wifey #4
new reader!
ivylicious18 #5
nice clumsy jae ^^
PurpleMidLuv #6
so cute~~~ ^^<br />
hahahaha...
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