My Gift to You

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In which Yesung's plans a surprise event that goes all wrong and Kyuhyun wonders if Yesung knows that he is the one that is supposed to recieve gifts on his birthday, whilst drinking tea and eating cake.

Foreword

Yayy!! This is my 35th story  in 7 months...that is sorta cool...just admit it..lol

I don't even know what to say in these things anymore and I am suspecting that people don't read them anyway.. [You guys do read them?...right? right?]...I give up...

Basically this is a prompt given to me by a very special Unnie that wanted me to write a story based on Yesung's birthday, expect she didn't want Kyuhyun to do the surprising but Yesung. I really liked it, even if she asked me to what is nearly impossible [Can't tell you guys...its a surprise] so was really eager to write it. Unfortunately work and other things got in the way and I was not able to finish it until now and it still isn't finished. It stands at 30K right now but by the time I edit and so on I am sure it will be atleast 32K.

It is set around his birthday like I said, but is full of surprises and is exceedingly sweet and cheesy and sappy and romantic and you all probably know what to expect and expect to be surprised ..right? ..I am not sure if I want this to be part of my continuuum but I might as well, since it was written that way. This is also one of the fics I was talking about in my last story. 

It will be posted either tonight or tomorrow, AST, so till then wish me luck :)

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Liza_Blessedx2 #1
Chapter 2: Reading this 9 years after it was written. and they are still making our Kyusung hearts flutter to this day.))) I adore this fic....the love confessions, and Kyuhyun's tears!!! Absolutely Precious<3<3<3 Thank you :D
lov_fan_Y #2
Chapter 2: Leyendo esto en el 2020 XD
JayJayELF #3
Chapter 1: This was one of the first stories of yours that i have read and forgot to leave a comment, but OMG this was one of your best stories. Yesung's cuteness the kissess. I'm like legit fangirling as i'm recounting what happened in the story. ahdbhbeineinwisjcnsnhivw
359359 #4
Chapter 1: All the cuteness just makes me gush like a little girl. Thanks so much for this wonderful fluff. Kyusung is <3
miss2l #5
(cont...) And all the kisses.... they make me so warm and fuzzy on the inside :3 especially the one where Yesung thought Kyuhyun was crying cuz he was sad. That one was a little more... developed (?) than their other ones but it shows that their relations IS developing and I like little details like that :3
And the bedroom scene... ah... even though you do seem to venturing out of the bedroom those will always feel the warmest <33 They appreciate the little things and cuddling in the bedroom is wonderful ^^
Overall, this fic is absolutely brilliant and don't know how I didn't read it earlier ;~; BUT to my defense, it took me like... 2 hours in total (probably more LOL) so it's not my fault I read so slow XD Anyway, sorry for the late comment ;~; I realise that you feel a little... I dunno... disappointed? with the lack of comments so I'll definitely try to be more vigilant ^^ either way, this fic was epic and sweet and amazing!! :D
miss2l #6
UNNIE!! I'm finally here to comment :3 I kind of went on a speed read read Naz-Unnie's stories when I saw your newest one about to be posted and I was like... I really need to read these XD
ANYWAY, to be quite honest, I was seriously scared about the Kyuhyun crying part you told me about so it did make me a little hesitant when reading :3 But you did it very very well!! ^^ I was half-expecting Kyu to either be severely touched when he cried or seriously upset and I'm super glad you chose the former :3 you chose a really good scene to do it and it seemed fluid and natural...LOVED IT ^^ I think Yesungie's love confessions were utterly precious!! His rambling and insecurities and Kyuhyun trying to interrupt... it was all very very sweet!! I almost died :D A good kind of die anyway :3
So... Yesungie is a bundle of romantic-ness I swear :3 The trying to recreate the cafe date and the cake and coffee and candles... Honestly, all the "failing" just made the whole thing cuter and more genuine. I loved it!!
And I really liked the mix of angst and fluff. The angst at the very beginning was a lovely bit of... dynamics for the fic. I liked the delving into their minds and seeing how they were simply misunderstanding each other... It was well done and I always appreciate a little bit of angst here and there :3 Also... it always seems like Yesung is thinking they'll break up or rather "Kyuhyun will get sick of him". Just something I've noticed and it makes me sad ;~; but when I think of it realistically, it's probably what's going on in his low self-esteem induced head. It's a nice bit of reality ^^
AWW YESUNGIE!! it's ok, I often feel dumb when I read unnie's fics cuz SHE uses big words I don't know :3 And... I didn't really know what 'obtuse' meant either so don't feel so bad XD
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Goemas12 #7
Chapter 2: KYYYYAAAAAAA gosh i absolutely fell in love with this story love it awesome it was simply incredible thank you for fic really loved it
akirachan #8
Chapter 2: the reason why only a few comments here because after reading this they become so amazed and just go ;_; or O.O or both at the same time. I mean this is AAAAMAAAAZZIIIING! :) and you made kyu cry because of the sweetness so you made me cry too. okay, ima stop talking now. :)

good job and THANK YOU for the awesome fic! :)
ice420 #9
*sobs* can I hug you? *squishes you tight* Darn, that was... Felt like it was my bday instead!! And you actually put the prompt? I have lots of love for this.. sooo many!! I can't put it into words. OMG the sweetness, the cheese, the love!! Oh my. I thought I love your Kyu more but Yesung is the romantic, even if he's not aware of it. To recreate that cafe scene is just.. aarrrgghh!! Perfect setting to make KyuBaby teary eyed ^^ Soo sweet!! and that kiss!! and that confession!! and the cuddles!! and omg, that picture from J-ELF meet.. I was actually thinking it after I read a fanaccount that Ye just grabbed Kyu's hand for no reason at all. I mean, perfect explanation, right? Sounds plausible? Do you think we're really delusional? Can we be cured? OMG.. I am rambling!! Don't care for any grammar mistakes I just type. damn.. soo sweet!!! soo lovely! romantic *sobs* I freakin love it! THANK YOU!!! OMG.

Oh, on a different and calmer note, don't mind the few comments just think how much joy you're giving to KyuSung lovers like us. I don't care if you write a novel, I'll read it. And will love it and support it. Go on your semi-hiatus, you've earned a rest. Let's spend your rest time spazzing instead since KyuSung is sort of not being 'ninja' lately.

Shinhwa broadcast, I love since KyuSung seldom separates. I notice that somehow, someway, they're always side by side ^^ Love it. Thank you again, my dear. I absolutely LOVE it!!!
AllSpecialSmile #10
And that's how I realize I love cheesy and romantic things. My heart skipped a dozen of beats when I was reading this new story. Seriously...Yesung's words, Kyuhyun's tears, and the kiss...They made my own eyes watery, I'm not joking xD it was too beautiful. Thank you so much for writing this ♥

(and I still can't believe you write that much ! You're amazing, really o.o)
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