DARK SALVATION

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                 He is humanity’s last test before the Final Judgment.

                 Created by both God and The Devil, Kai is a mechanism that will settle their millennium-long debate on who should be the final ruler of Earth. But there is a catch: Kai is an entity without a heart, mind or soul. He is an empty shell that is programmed to learn and mimic human emotions based on the people he meets. With each passing human encounter, his eyes and inner being darken as he only sees the faults of humanity.

                All he need is one touch of kindness to relieve him of that empty feeling inside, but all he sees is the darkness of the world. That is until he found a spark of light in one special girl — a girl that will be the salvation of humankind, the savior of Earth...and him.

 

Main Characters:

KAI: A heartless, mindless and soulless entity created by God and The Devil to test humans. His eye color changes depending on his level of “goodness” and “badness”. 

 

Li, Guang Mei: An eighteen-year-old girl with color-blindness (she only sees the world in black and white). She’s honest and can be blunt at times. 

 

Foreword

I'm not religious but I find this idea very interesting and I have this urge to put it down on paper (or in this case, AFF).

This will be different from my other stories because instead of romantic comedy/angst, this will be a more grim story. It is symbolic in a way because Kai's character here is liken to a newborn baby (a baby's upbringing/nurture can affect who he/she is later in life).

 

NOTE: THE POSTER IS MADE BY INSPIREDSPIRIT!

Author's Thoughts
KumihoGirl
Chapter 1 will be out either Sunday or Monday.
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Crazygirl101 #1
Chapter 7: I love this story so far! whoop whoop!! Kai and Guang Mei!! ^^
Indigoh #2
Chapter 7: Awww, poor baby Kai T^T he needs a home too! But the cabin will do ok, it has books and Guang Mei is close, and she will teach him to read and everything necessary for life. I love a plot about a robot, the fact that they look like us but at the same time they are so fundamentally different, and what amazes me is the supposed ability to learn that they have... You know... Emotions and independent thinking are learned?? Or is it that these emerge on their own?? Well, I love this story, so thanks for the update ♥
pinkpanther1017 #3
Chapter 7: Wait, how did Guang Mei know Kai doesn't need food or water?

Things seem to be working out almost perfectly. Right after abandoning Kai, he and Guang Mei met up again a few days later and is even allowed to stay with her. I was kind of hoping there would be a little more struggle, but I look forward to seeing how Kai develops under Guang Mei's nurturing :)

And I guess I misunderstood your Author's Note from the last chapter, but I was expecting EXO-K to appear. Not that I'm impatient though because I do want to see more Guang Mei/Kai interactions.
evilmagnae #4
Chapter 7: Ah... :)
Idk why but im thinking this as werewolf boy (song joongki)
Thanks for the update^^
Your story is good!
frauleinhyu #5
Chapter 7: interesting to see that kai has some interest toward guang mei yet he couldnt make it into action nor say words to her.
im really wondering if kai i doing great with guang mei`s language lesson ^^
frauleinhyu #6
Chapter 7: interesting to see that kai has some interest toward guang mei yet he couldnt make it into action nor say words to her.
im really wondering if kai i doing great with guang mei`s language lesson ^^
jumpinCATZ #7
Chapter 6: whoa that was fast.. yeaa!! i'm thankful that her uncle is such a nice person. hurray for the uncle!
summerdrag #8
Chapter 6: i guess fate totally brought them together again. i can imagine sehun's character being a snobby one hah cant wait .
pinkpanther1017 #9
Chapter 6: Must be fate that Guang Mei's uncle happened upon Kai, and seeing how she's been regretting leaving him alone, I get the feeling she's going to try to convince her aunt and uncle to let him stay with them, thus beginning his journey on trying to become human.
Also, since his eyes were black at the beginning but they're topaz now, does that mean he's becoming more good?
And I'm sure Sehun will not be happy with Kai's entrance into Guang Mei's life. But I find it cute that he's a lovesick puppy around her ^_^ Hopefully he doesn't get too jealous and try to wreak havoc with Kai, because I fear what the consequences will be. Like Kai might retaliate and since he has superhuman strength, it could end badly for Sehun.
Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter :)
lestrarhestur #10
Chapter 5: Ooooo excited about what will happen next!
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