His Saviour

Description

I'm a girl who goes through life unnoticed. But I've been through a lot. And I would do whatever it takes to save someone from the things that haunt me.

Foreword

Hi! I wrote this on a single seating. I just suddenly felt like writing so THIS came. Thanks a lot for reading. Enjoy! :)

Now for the usual. Constructive criticisms are needed. Praises are good :D And normal comments are fine too. THANKS!

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perplexing
#1
this is wonderful.
ballerina682 #2
Chapter 1: Im actually crying....... TAO COME HOLD ME!!!!! Lol im reading this infront of my mom and she probably thinking: what the hell is my daughter on drugs or something?!?!?!
Sannin
#3
Chapter 1: That was so beautiful ofmg.
LocketKay
#4
Chapter 1: Ohmygosh~ This was good. :)
sapphire_flower
#5
Chapter 1: Athirah~ I envy your story~ your writing is so awesome and matured. I mean, the choice of words and everything. btw.. I noticed!! hehehe..

I did thought about the Hunger Games while reading this fic.. >.<
Good job! *thumbs up n_n
kangjein
#6
Chapter 1: Wow... This is something... I mean in a good way ^^
hexagon #7
Chapter 1: my feels, dude
my feels
; ~ ;
Exofangull
#8
Chapter 1: Officially now in love with tao
samyeol #9
Chapter 1: you are a genius. i love it! gosh i can't even....
iloveyounot
#10
Chapter 1: NICEEE! ♥ ;~;