Chapter 1: The story is really poetic ^^ but I felt a little lost through the oneshot. Guess my brain isn't processing it people. Will try reading it once again and see if I understand it better.

Chapter 1: oh my God how come I just found it now??!! its soooo beautiful!!! you should write more kkk. thank you!!

Chapter 1: this is so amazing. it's like i'm reading super cool poetry :D

m not a huge jaesu fan but recently i m growing love for this pair and ur story made me love them more..i loved this fic so much..it left a bittersweet feeling for days in me...i absolutely love ur writing style..^^

Thank you so much! :'D

love it love it love it!

Ah, actually, the punctuation was done like that on purpose. ^^ It's a style of dramaticized writing. But thank you for the comment~!

The best way to improve your already detailed writing is working on your punctuation. People tend to run away from poorly written stories.

It made you cry? Oh gosh, that's really something. Thanks for the comment, and yeah, glad you enjoyed it. ^^

Wow this made me cry it made me think deeply about my own life and where im going with it. I often crawl out on my rooftop and dream about i love to escape it made me sad abd a little happy