The Moon of Twelve

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XiaoChing didn't believe in help from strangers. Let alone more than one. She was a visionary...literally. All she wanted was to help her world, and save his at the same time. They were all that remained. She and those 12 warriors would fight until the end. Until Aloria was right again.

Sorry, my short descriptions aren't that great. I promise you this isn't crappy fantasy that involve vampires and wolves and shiznit. It does give exo their 'chosen' powers, but it more fits the line of historical fantasy. Think of like feudal Asia (AKA kings/emporers). Please take time to read some of it. 

Both Korean and Chinese names and words will be used throughout the story, but don't worry, It won't be anything difficult.

Also, there is no date of when I'll post the first chapter. I have it written on paper, but not typed up, so it has to be edited before I post it. 

Another, if there is someone willing to create a banner for my story, I'd be happy if you'd contact me.

Foreword

Hidden. The word described Aloria well. The small little planet had managed to hide itself in the shadow of Earth for billions of years. Years of technology from Earth proved as good as nothing.  For milleniums, Aloria had stayed unseen, untouched, and undiscovered. The people had stayed under the rule of one royal ancestry and their closest advisors--the oracles--and not since the beginning of time had the Alorians experienced anything less than peace...but peace only lasted for so long. Things had gone differently this time. All elders of the royal family had vanished, even the recent king who had suffered from old age, leaving his young, and most importantly, unmarried son with the throne. Not long after the news spread, an outrage came from the lands. The emporer was too young too make decisions, even with the oracles' help, and more than that he was unmarried. Change was nearly instant. It was then that the Alorians found themselves split in three: The royal guard (Jong), the new rebellion (Kechi), and those who wanted nothing to do with the war (CuXin). The Kechi refused to have their land ruled by an incompetant man, and had seeked the young emperor's death along with the oracles all in order to form a new royal legacy and stop the endless reign. The emperor was then pushed into hiding in the Ching Gong Mountains seperated from the oracles in hope of preserving some of the tradition, but even the oracles were left with the a limited number of three. One a young female by the name of Hong Xiao Ching who was willing to risk her life to keep the royal legacy alive despite her gift. To her the gift of foresight was a curse... a curse that decreased your lifespam the more they used the gift leaving her father and mother with time nearly gone. 
"It is time," Her father spoke grimly. "time to call all twelve of them...and hope Aloria will return back to the way it was."
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It was soon for them. They knew their time was almost here. Soon they were promised. Soon they would be able to perform on stage. They would be able to have fans cheer loudly for them. They'd be able to do anything. The 12 of them would spend their entire lives performing nonstop and they wouldn't regret it.
"Hey Kai, did you hear? According to Mr. Lee Soo Man, we'll be debuting in a few months!! It's awesome right? Then we can participate in the 2011 SMTown right?!! This is going to be awesome. Practice hard!"
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Though she did not understand it she accepted it. The fate of Aloria rested in the hands of twelve stangers and her own. She had no faith that she had what it would take, but Aloria depended on her and these twleve strangers. Who were the twelve strangers? How would they even be of help? More importantly, how could they save Aloria before it became a field of Tyrants?

 

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