The Treachery

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Hay ^^ I am new author here. I'm sorry for my bad grammar. Because, English isn't my first language even though, I use it sometimes. Actually, it's my first experience to write English Fic.. Hope you won't be getting bored (>̯͡⌣<̯͡) For some information, this story is inspirationed by that my mother ever told me about...

Foreword

Do you know? I'm the one who hurt so much here. Do you realize? You are the one who slaps me like hell, bullying me like I am humble and you enjoying shouting at me. Do you catch sight? My tears such as lava as rolling out of my eyes. Saturate my cheeks as accompanying my pained out. Do you hear? I Love you. Anyhow you treated me roughly... my heart still doesn't change...

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Stupidspy2012 #1
Chapter 3: Can i slap yunho...godd i really dislike yunho here...how can he do that to jae..make sure yunho will regret his acts towards jae very soon..hope yunho will get hard and cold punishment for hurting jae..may be seunghyun will be ok for jae...wow can't wait for the update
toriYJYSM
#2
Chapter 2: Hehehe finally I found ur AFF acc in here caca^^
Wae must u use ahra again ca? I'm alr enough with this cough_____cough girl :(
This girl really don't have shame. U just maid un there. Jaejoongie's body is more-more perfect than u ahra-ssi.
Just see yunho, day by day u will be falling in love with my beautiful mama jaejoongie, huh !! *confident* :D
And yun, u must go to hospital after ur kiss scene w/ that ahra girl. Myb that girl have a virus *just kidding*

I need a next chapter cacaaaaaa~ plz update more~ hehe^^
Windrunner
#3
Wow, finally u made it!! ur first fic. Imm...u'll not make oori yunnie as a bad person.right? Aish whatever I'll support ur fic.Pls update soon.. n make happy yunjae couple kkk,FIGHTING!!!
xrozex #4
Thaank you sooo much
This chapter is good i can ubdrestand it
Yah yunho you make me angry
Cant you see how pretty jae
And sooo cute not like
That girl he is sooo good for you
You have to protect him and dont hurt him
Waiting for their married life chapter
Please update sooooon
ricadbsk #5
Oh my xiahnism, you're rite dear.. I've just realized it. askdjflz kinda messy for reading (っ╯_╰c) I'm so sorry, I'll fix it asap as I online via computer. As you know, I typed it in my cellphone and went copas it here. Thanks for reminded me (^▽^)
xrozex #6
Thank you sooo much
Its look a good one
Hope its will be a happy ending
But i want to ask you
If you can put the conversation of them
In single line not all in one line
Sooo we can know who is the one
Is talking
Waiting for the next chapter
Please update soooon
Eunhyuks_girl #7
please update next chapter