The Poison Apple Tree

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"Well I know that you know that I know that you do want another bite of this apple!"

"Well I’m gunna be the better person and finish the apple for you like a gentleman."

And without any idea of what they’ve now done to themselves, the fruit’s venom flows one with their pure blood—an everlasting serum bodied inside them where with every bite is a tank of more poison. Each split second becomes a chance for the virus to spread through their small five-year-old souls and wrench them ‘til death. But they simply throw their mouths into the desire for such a scrumptious looking apple, chewing it until it reaches the pit of their tiny stomachs.

How can an apple, something so above suspicion, turn into something so sinful? Had the two little children known what this harmless play could uphold, they would’ve never even think about walking by the fruit tree. Not a single thought.

But what’s done is done. They can’t take it back.

It’s the gift of immortality, the weight of inhumanity, and the strength of the indestructible.

 

 

The Poison Apple Tree.

 

 

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Foreword

The chance to live forever. Sounds great doesn't it?   

Au contraire mon cheri.

 

As said long before: With power, comes great responsibilty.

Penalities that'll make you wish you were never born.

 

Never mind the downsides. Doesn't it sound nice to be undestructible, beautiful, everlasting

It's what human beings long for after all.

 

To think, all of that could be yours with just one bite of an apple.

But is it that simple? No tricks? Is it really just like that?     Not in this world.

 

 

 

The Poison Apple Tree.

 

 

 

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Credits for the lovely poster go to Arts of Royalty {Graphics & Reviews}

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rainyfriday
#1
Wow... Everything about this story is amazing.
Your choice of words, how the story flows... And everything.. It is all so perfect.
Im so glad I found this gem.
I'm going to tell my friends about this fic because its so wonderful.
Seungmi_Lynn
#2
Chapter 5: I agree with shineeshawol04 the way you write is beautiful! Sungjong, Nayoung, everything!
shineeshawol04
#3
Oh My GOSH you are AMAZING !!I mean the way you write is like.. WOW the words you chose to describe what was happening is so.. professional and poetic-like if that makes sense :p if you were a student and i was a teacher i would give you an A+ ^^ of course you're older then me but anyways UPDATE SOON ^^ !!
strawberry-sshi
#4
Love it so far! I love the choice of words and the chapters so far are amazing! Subscribed! ^^
AndyKyu
#5
This sounds super interesting! Te description was very detailed, and the choice of words was fantastic. "an everlasting serum bodied inside them where with every bite is a tank of more poison. " gave me a shock. I can't wait to see more! (And I'm not sure who the poster was assigned to, but we'll get arou d to it as soon as we can!)

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