X a n J i M i e ♦ Review Shop [CLOSED]]
Description
♦Welcome to X a n J i M i e Review Shop♦
Where we cater to all of your reviewing needs.
-Hello-
Hello everyone! My name is Raihn and I am the owner of this new shop.
Thank you so much for taking the time to check us out!
This is my first time reviewing, but I swear to you I will do my absolute best!
Okay, now that we've gone through intros...
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Our main priority is to help YOU with your writing. Yes, YOU.
How, you ask?
♦We will give you our honest and non-biased opinions about your story.
♦Point out the areas where you need improvement.
♦And we will absolutely NOT sugar-coat things because we're doing this for your benefit.
(No worries, we're not heartless beings.)
So why don't you leave us a request?
-Status-
| Open | Busy | Closed | Hiring |
August 10 2012: Grand Opening!
-Rules-
1. Please credit the reviewer and our shop! That's all we ask...
2. I don't really care if you subscribe or not. Up to you.
3. Comment once you've received your request.
4. Please don't bash. We're giving you our honest opinions and our priority is to help you improve. If, however, you feel that there is a problem with your review, PM me.
5. We accept completed, uncompleted, and one-shots. If it's uncompleted, please have at least 5 chapters done.
6. If you want to cancel your request, please tell us ASAP.
Well, those are the rules...Have fun!
-Staff-
♦ToneHarmonic : Raihn♦
`Status: Busy
`Preferred Genres: Anything. Even Yuri. (I find it slightly awkward, but if needed, I will read it.)
`Rated or Non-Rated: Both
`Strictness: Completely depends on the person I'm reviewing. I can be both (and still be completely honest). Tell me which.
`Favorite Group(s): B.A.P, U-Kiss, Block B
`Extra stuff: I uh...like strawberry cheescake ice cream? I'm asian. I don't sleep very much...So yeah, panda eyes. O.O I also am fluent in English.
♦Xiao Zhen : Xiao Zhen♦
`Status: Hiatus
`Preferred Genres: Comedy, but I'm basically okay with reading any kind of genre except /yuri, i-n-c-e-s-t, mpreg, and gender bender.
`Rated or Non-Rated: Both. I'm okay with full stories, r-a-p-e, and violent .
`Strictness: 6/10
`Favorite Group(s): SMTown
`Extra stuff: My focus in reviewing is in plot, characterization, and flow. Grammar and all those technical stuff are second to me, mostly because though I'm fluent in English, it is not my first language. And besides, it can be improved over time, or you can just hired a proof reader. Even though I'm not that strict with the technical stuff, I will point out your mistake and correct them. It's just I'm not as cruel in deducting marks in that section compare to other reviewers.
♦J-walkerspirit : Mei♦
`Status: Available
`Preferred Genres: Anything is fine [ ; yuri ; everything]
`Rated or Non-Rated: Both.
`Strictness: Well, I can be strict if you want.
`Experience: I never reviewed before [officially], but every time I read a story I correct the author's mistakes
`Favorite Group(s): Super Junior, Infinite, C-CLOWN, A-Jax, ZE:A, The Boss, Epik High, 4minute...and Exo.
`Extra stuff: Don't expect me to lie to you, okay? I review from my own point of view and I'll be as honest as possible. But don't worry, I'm a nice kid who has a little crush on Jay Park, but loves YU BAROM more. I like to read horror books [mainly], but I'm okay with any genre. I have no life until 10th of september [we're starting school then] and...Heo Gayoon is my ultimate [and only] female bias.
♦ChocoPocky: Erika♦
`Status: Available
`Preferred Genres: Any genre would do except for , Yuri, Mpreg, and .
`Rated or Non-Rated: Non-Rated
`Strictness: I will base it on the writer. Whether English is their first language, how old they are, or etc. Let me know if there’s anything else.
`Experience: I know it sounds absurd, but this is my first time applying for a review shop or doing a review for someone.
`Favorite Group(s): Infinite, Exo K/M, Coldplay, DBSK, SS501, B.A.P, and ZE:A
`Extra stuff: I am a 14 year old Asian girl currently striving to become a PA (Physician Assistant). Fluent in English and Filipino, I have an ambition to learn more languages and become the best that I can in my studies, violin, writing, and web-designing. Hopefully, my lack of experience will not get in the way of reviewing.
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Foreword
Recommended Stories
-These are a list of stories we recommend-
|| Carnivorous (M) by FallingArrows ||
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Review Form
Title:
Author:
Story Link:
Completed, Uncompleted, One-Shot:
Genre:
Reviewer:
Rated:
Other:
-Comment below-
Rubric
Title: 0/5
Is it eye-catching? Is it related to your story?
Description/Foreword: 0/15
Does it make me want to read more? Does it give too much away?
Plot: 0/25
Is it original? Is there a clear conflict? Does it excite me?
Characterization: 0/20
Are the characters well thought out? Are they realistic? Do they change over time?
Flow: 0/10
Too fast or too slow? Are cliffhangers present?
Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling: 0/15
Are there words frequently misspelled? Are your tenses correct? Is your capitalization correct?
Enjoyment: 0/10
Personal opinion.
Reviewers Comment (Optional)
Status List
Work-in-Progress/Pending/Completed/Declined
Chapter || Username || Story Title || Reviewer
Chapter One || KissMe_Angel || When Accidents Happen || XiaoZhen
Chapter Two || KpopLover15751|| Teaching How to Spy || ToneHarmonic
Chapter Three ||kpoplistener || Aish! That Jung Daehyun! || XiaoZhen
Chapter Four || Janie95 ||| The Pieces of Memory || ToneHarmonic
Chapter Five || sticky ||| Superman || daedreaming
Autumn Hearts | The Snow Queen
Chapter Six || anneistee || Little Notes || ToneHarmonicChapter Seven || FallingArrows || Carnivorous || ToneHarmonic
Chapter Eight || kpoplistener || Twins Adventure || ToneHarmonic
Chapter Nine || anahus || No need 'sorry' || ToneHarmonic
Chapter Ten || zeyniiDara || Love Bloomed at School Trip || J-walkerspirit
Chapter Eleven || Pab0Panda || Love to be loved by you || ToneHarmonic
If your request has been declined, there was a probably a problem with your submission. I don't blacklist so you can still request again. ^^
Contents
Chapter 1: Requests
Comments