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Over

 

"We need to talk."
 
I stumbled around a corner, trying to catch my breath before starting to run again. All I wanted was to get away from that damn apartment. To get away from him.
 
"This is a mistake."
 
Tears streamed down my face as I ran through the empty streets. Was it all a big lie? Did he ever mean it when he told me he loved me?
 
"We're not made for each other."
 
My legs gave away under me and I sank down to the floor, hugging myself. Sobbing I laid my head on my knees, giving up all my strength. Nobody could see me here anyway.
 
"It's not your fault."
 
I should have known that it would happen some day. Why would somebody as perfect as he is like me? It was too good to be true.
 
"I can leave if you want me to."
 
Shaking I got back on my feet and slowly walked to the next hotel. I couldn't go back to that apartment. At least not today.
 
"I'm sorry."
 
 
 
 
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Emmauk26
#1
what nooooo, why, *sob* I don't like this, you broke OnTae up. ;-(
Triple-Key
#2
It's a little... i don't know, underdeveloped. Quite short, but I'm not criticising you for that because I've seen very short creative pieces and I was crying/squealing. I just thought you could have gave the protagonist a little bit more of a character, show his theories why taemin/onew had broken up with him. The slightest hint i got is that the latter is too good for him. But no one's perfect so... Yeah. I could sympathise with him, but there's just not enough there to evoke emotion out of me... And yeahhh
sayangdubu
#3
This is kind of like onew POV