A Sweet Black Day

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Description

A short story about a sweet friendship between a girl and a boy, Ginny and Jaejoong. A six years of friendship has risen up their feelings towards each other and it become bigger when it’s time to be apart. Ginny went abroad for her study and Jaejoong stayed in the city, waiting for his best friend to come back to him so that he will have the chance to tell her his real feelings. But some things happened in these four and a half years, no contacts, no answers, no news and no one could tell them what is going on.

A promise has been made before she left him, a bet actually. And now she’s back to win the bet, or will she? Does he even remember about the simple bet he told her? Will he come?

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I decided to use my name for the main girl character because actually I was imagining if it was me inside the story, blame me. ^^v But you can freely pretending as if your name was Ginny or maybe you want to replace my name with your idol's name. I won't mind!
Now, sorry if there's a lot of failed grammars on my writing, English isn't my first language..

I hope you'll comment ^^

 

for my readers, who have read this story before, some part in this story will be edited, based on the review i've got a week ago..

enjoy!

Foreword

It's been too long and I'm lost without you
What am I gonna do?
Said I been needin' you, wantin' you
(Said I need you)
Wonderin' if you're the same and who's been with you
Is your heart still mine?
I wanna cry sometimes
I miss you

Off to college
Since you went away
Straight from high school
You up and left me
We were close friends
Also lovers
Did everything
For one another
Now you're gone and I'm lost without you here now
But I know I gotta live and make it somehow

Come back...to me
Can you...feel me (Callin')
Hear me...callin' (For you)
For you...'Cause it's

It's been too long and I'm lost without you
What am I gonna do?
Said I been needin' you, wantin' you
Wonderin' if you're the same and who's been with you
Is your heart still mine?
I wanna cry sometimes
I miss you

Now I'm sittin' here
Thinkin' 'bout you
And the days we used to share
It's drivin' me crazy
I don't know what to do
I'm just wonderin' if you still care
I don't wanna let you know
That it's killin' me
I know you got another life you gotta concentrate baby

Come back...to me
Can you...feel me (Callin')
Hear me...callin' (For you)
For you...'Cause it's

I...can't...breathe...no...more
Since you went away I
Don't really feel like talkin'
No one here to love me
Baby do you understand me
I can't do or be without you

 

song : I Miss You by Aaliyah

Comments

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gofanfic
#1
good short story!
me likey :D
A_Diyoung
#2
oh my god, this is damn good!!! DAEBAK! O.O
JaeAndMe
#3
Just finish reading, you're really a great writer. And i will never get tired of telling you that, And you MR. KIM I LOVED YOU EVEN MORE ^^ <br />
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please don't stop writing. From now on I will be one of your avid reader. *HUGS U*
heart_teanee
#4
waaaa...<br />
great story...<br />
it's nice, u r such a good writer!!<br />
<br />
It ended so fast, but I really enjoy it!!<br />
:)
BambiJiBin
#5
it ended so fast? D: I didn't expect it to end this fast D: but omfg i truly loved it! It was so sweet... Must have hurt for both sides to be apart for that long, the pain and frustration she had over airport security lol
madz67
#6
Aww... ended already?! D:<br />
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YEY~! THEY are together...<br />
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I LOVE this part~!:<br />
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“Ginny??” Jaejoong stared at me with wide eyes. What? I thought you would be happy to see me. “But..but.. you..you..”<br />
<br />
Okay, it’s not even five years yet, and he’s become more idiot than before. “I’m what?”<br />
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“..hot..” he whispered under his breath but I still heard it. Well, you guess! Of course I am blushing like a poached shrimp now, a small smile came across my face. “You changed.”<br />
BambiJiBin
#7
WAAAAAAAAAAAH!!<br />
<br />
I wanna know what happens next 8D omfg I love this chapter, so much intenseness I'm all worked up :D
BambiJiBin
#8
Yes... Jaejoong... where the hell are you?<br />
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Omfg if what happened to her at the airport happened to me I'll so cry for the rest of my life. That's why I hate airport security lol XD<br />
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They are such lazy bums~
BambiJiBin
#9
because they called me hyung and I ordered them around the campus.<br />
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LOL typical Jaejoong, and the eye of Yoochun's English paper XD nice!<br />
I've officially learned a new word 8D
BambiJiBin
#10
I love the first chapter by far 8D Moving to the second, you are a really good writer!