Chapter 2: Myungsoo is putting on the charm to approach girls in the surrounding area as a way of seeking out his soulmate. Though, it doesn't look like he's getting anywhere since they all easily fall for his charms. There doesn't seem to be true love there. To others, she does appear to be insane when she was talking to Woohyun who's invisible to them. Woohyun has the ability to make himself visible to others, but he doesn't use it in this situation. It would be strange for the public to see a weird-looking creature that's out of this world. One look from Miyoung and they flee because of her resemblance to Sadako. Hiding her face behind a curtain of her hair seems to represent her isolation from the world. She probably doesn't care to show her face to anybody after all the misery that she went through being unaccepted by others. If she did brush her hair away from her face, she wouldn't look frightening to them.

Typos:

Your always so sarcastic now and cranky.
Correction: You're

What would he though made me this way?
Correction: What does he think made me this way?

An update is an update no matter what length it is. You typed up what you could off the top of your head. Math must not be your favorite subject for you to not want to pay attention to the lectures. I understand since it's not my best subject either. That doesn't make you a complete failure even though you're not faring well. Everybody in general go through that phase before getting better at something. It's in our nature since we're imperfect beings. We can't be expected to be good at everything. It's not the end of the world since you can still pull up that grade by putting time and effort into your studies.

Chapter 2: OMG UPDATE YEAH???

Chapter 1: that chick is so damn lucky... Myungsoo and Woohyun in her room... so jealous right now. <3 the 1st chapter, please update soon

Chapter 1: UPDATE ASAP! i liked the 1st chappi! <3

Chapter 1: REALLLY GOOOD PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLLLEEEAAASSSEE????

This looks like a good original plot that you're working on for this fic. Waking up to a guy that seems to appear out of nowhere is one of those "what the hell" moments. A doll that comes to life is reminiscent of the fairytale character, Pinocchio, whom this fic is named after. Except, Myungsoo isn't inhabiting a body made of wood. Miyoung didn't seem to take Myungsoo seriously because of how he appeared to her. That obviously was a joke since nobody can be convinced by an unclothed person. Myungsoo must have a child-like mentality to not think much of it. He did die really young after all, so there's bound to be immaturity in his behavior. Woohyun is such a narcissist. xD Making Myungsoo say all that out loud just to flatter himself is evident of that. He seems to be a fun character despite being the Grim Reaper. This all must be unbelievable to Miyoung since she doesn't believe in the supernatural. It's good that she took it all right in the end. We'll see how the soulmate search would turn out. It seems like a task that'd take years of work. If Miyoung is actually his destined soulmate, then he wouldn't have to search any further.

I notice that there are some typos throughout the chapter. However, they don't make the paragraphs messy to read. It looks well-written for the most part. The most commonly misused word is "cloths," which is actually supposed to be "clothes" since you're referring to apparel.

new story seems so awesome! update soon

CAME HERE FROM ZELO'S ROOMIE AUTHORRRRR NIMMMMMM :3

LOOL uhaha myungmyung and namstar in the house~ xD
Update soon!

Huh... FIRST COMMENT >:D so I'm so happy she got used to the idea of a dead soul xD I thought this was Gunna be a whole chap on how she is scared and can't believe it then freak out x3 good story so far and I think woohyun will be my fav character :P I like his personality haha~ myungsoo...*daydream*