Clean This Dirty Heart *Hiatus

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Hana  (Ha-Na) owes a boy her life. He did save her afterall. When he claims to want nothing in return, she begs. How can she not repay him? In payment, Hana takes up the job of becoming the boy and his roomates' maid. Will she become more?

Karma was finally laying its wrath upon her. After leaving her parents and disobeying their orders to not move in with her boyfriend, Hana (Ha-Na) did so anyway. Making what she thought was the right choice turned her wonderful life around. Her parents didn't want anything to do with her. Her boyfriend began cheating, and everything went downhill. Not strong enough to leave him, Hana lives day by day under her own cloudy karma filled sky, until one day she meets a boy. A boy who saves her life...literally and figuratively.

BTW this is my first fanfic! Sorry if it's horrible :/

 

Li Hana

I'll leave her up to your imagination;)

She cares a lot for other people and has a hard time standing up for herself.

The one time she decided to stand up for herself caused her relationship with her parents to cease.

Hana has a hard time hating people because she knows that no one is perfect.

This attribute may be a cause to her current situation and more to come.

Yan Enlai

Hana's boyfriend

He's basically a douche bag and doesn't really care about Hana.

He ocasionally abuses her

He's a damn cheater A/N What a buttface! ;)

 

Kris

Works at the bar as a bartender.

Loves all of his roomates but rarely shows emotions.

He doesn't accept Hana. Their first meeting wasn't exactly the greatest.

He believes that she has another motive behind her simple maid job.

He believes she's pulling the innocent card and is just another crazed girl from the bar wanting to get closer to him. A/N Egotistic much? hehe xD

Luhan

Naturally happy and cute.

He easily becomes one of Hana's favorites.

After becoming the maid, Hana doesn't expect to be treated as a friend, but Luhan breaks the barrier.

He is very sweet and easily falls for Hana.

 

And of course the rest of Exo M are involved:)

Foreword

Disclaimer: No, I do not own exo m oooorr those pictures:)

 

Please no plagirism. This story/plot is purely mine. Any likeness to other stories or such are purely coincidental.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Speckofaworld
This story is going on hiatus for now. In the mean time, you can check out my 2nd fic if you'd like:) I honestly think it's much better than this one. hehe

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000521
#1
Chapter 3: I LOVE THIS
AyoWhatUpKrease
#2
Omg. I meant I don't hate Hana. Wow my kindle autocorrect....
AyoWhatUpKrease
#3
I don't hats Jana, I pity her :/ She's so broken and beaten down that she doesn't think other people would love her, like how Lulu does. She cant bring herself to trust him because by now, she thinks she's worthless. Lol maybe I'm looking too much into the character, but she needs healing. I read that you think this story is directionless? Aw, that . I really like this one! But I understand!
JustDerpin
#4
omfg. Hana you're ing stupid. I'M SORRY BUT I CAN'T-- I JUST CAN'T-- /raging tities/ I CAN'T CALM MAH !!! OMFG! WHY HANA?!! WHY MUST YOU BE SO BLIND WITH LOVE?!!! AND NONETHELESS WITH A STUPID JERK LIKE HIM?! SRSLY. /calms myself/ 1..2....10 /sighs in frustration/ Hana. I swear, I swear to all my ancestors grave that you need some ing glasses, like for real. Why do you choose a jerk that hits you over EXO who treats you like a damn friend that cares a lot more than that ing bastard!!!!!! Urgh. Now look what you did to Kris And Luhan! YOU MADE THE TWO FIGHT!! Ooijgpserohilejk9ji0ernohjierjphkwroh[wr /rages again/ OKAY. I'm out. Peace. I don't know what to ing say anymore.

Sorry for the language yet again... ;___; /runs away to kick the wall and punch it till my hand bleeds/
u-knowkey
#5
HANA GO TO KRIS AND THE OTHER EXO MEMBERS! Don't go back to that don't know how many timing douche bag! Even if you don't want to go to Kris because of how mean Kris was, ATLEAST HE DIDN'T HIT YOU LIKE ENLAI!
JustDerpin
#6
Omfg. I swear if she chooses Enlai. I don't know what to do anymore, except ing scream!!!!! Klslskwsndolds URGH. I swear. I literally swear.

Girl, you're blind if you choose Enlai or in my case, the ing bastard faced jerk,I never ever want to meet in my whole life, if possible. Dont you see Hana? He treats you like freaking rubish! No slash that, a spec of dirt in his life. Dump that idiot! You had it a while ago when you said that you had no respect for him anymore, girl, I was rooting for you. Until you ing ran out and took him back! C'mon! Choose Kris, for Christ sake! Though he was a jerk to you at first , he did it for a freaking reason. And you know it! Plus have you not see him treat your wounds earlier and stood up for you? Oh btw one last advice from me. Be ing smart. Lol, omfg. I was too dramatic there, I swear. XD lol, but srsly, I needed to say that so badly!!! /le deep face/ sorry, for the language! >.<
JongKeyIsyyy
#7
Hana, pick Krease! Enlai has hurt you so many times. Can't you see he doesn't love you? Yes, Kris hasn't been the nicest welcoming committee, but he doesn't hit you, and he's not a lowly scumbag! He has a reason for this, he thinks you're a crazy girl! Well, I don't think I'm helping the situation, but Kris can love you bettah guuuuuurl! Omg, wtf am I saying? Anyways, Kris!!
JustDerpin
#8
Aww... D; Poor Hana, I pity her for having such a bad life and great bad luck! I hope some light would shed onto her life soon! urgh!! Stupid Enlai!!! Why can't Hana just kick him out or get another apartment?!! she works doesn't she? then she can afford to do so! =3= He's not worth your tears, guuurrrll!! he's just a freaking douchebag that only knows how to play around with girls! BEAT HIS !! /fist pumps/ D:< and Kris Y U SUCH A JERK?! does Hana look like a freaking crzy girl to you? if she was a crzy girl from the bar then you would see her there, wouldn't you? and also she would be freaking flirting with you 24/7!! URGH OPEN YOUR EYES KRISUS!!! >.< Hwaiting Hana~!! Me is here to be your back up! b'cuz I know some Karate! ;DD kekekeke! please update soon author nim!
AyoWhatUpKrease
#9
Luhan is such a cutie pie, my goodness!! Krease is almost making me want to punch him. I mean, he can lighten up a little! I mean geez... Nice twist!
u-knowkey
#10
KRIS OMG WHATS WRONG WITH YOU. GAH Atleast the other guys are nice (: