FINAL

You look exactly like him

Minho's POV

    I woke up to find Key hyung and Taesun in my hospital room. "Hyung are you feeling better?" Taesun asked. "Im felling better sunnie" I told him trying to be as nice as could remembering what Taemin told me the other night. "Minho the doctor said your free to go. Im going to get the discharge papers" Key hyung said and left. "Taesun want to go get some ice cream after I get out of here?" I asked. He nodded his head.

     It had tooken me a while to convince Key hyung I was well enough to take Tasun out for ice cream but, I had done it. Taesun and I sat on a pair of swing on a park after we got our ice cream. "Minho hyung can I aske you something?" "Sure" Do you like me and I dont mean as a friend I mean love" he said. "Im sorry Taesun but,i dont. Im not like that" I tried to tell him nicley looking into his teary eyes. "There's someone else isnt there?" "No! Taesun i-" "Leave me alone I dont want to hear it" he said and ran away.

       I had told my hyungs what had happend and said they would keep trying to contact him. A couple hours later I got text from Key hyung:

                                              - Come home now!-

It read. Something was wrong usually Key put a smiley at end of every message. I ran to the dorm and found my hyungs tied and gagged on the floor with Tasun on the couch loading a gun. "Taesun put the gun down. What are you doing?" I asked. "Hyung you dont love me so I have to get them out of our way" he said pointing the gun at Onew hyungs head. My hyungs tried to convince him to stop but, had trouble since their mouths were gagged. Then I saw him ready to pull the trigger but, I jumped at him which caused him to fall to the floor and the gun slid to the other side of the room. Taesun and I raced to it but having long legs I had an advantage and got to it first.

      I pointed the gun at him. He looked at me right when I was going to pull the trigger I stopped. When I saw him I saw Taemin instead. At that moment I knew what Taemin had meant by me having to make a choice. I had to let Taemin go, everytime I see Tasun I just imagine Taemin. Then I heard the door get broken down. "Drop the gun and put your hands in the air!" a police officer said. A couple others came in and handcuffed Tasun. " Are you ok?" the officer said. "Yea. Where are you taking him?" Key hyung asked. " back to the mental hospital" "BACK?" we asked "Yea he's been there for a year but he broke out we've been trying to find". I looked at Taesun getting put into the police car.

                                                      - 3 months later-

     Were finally doing out Lucifer comeback. We've been working hard for Taemin. "SHINee go to the stage" the PD said. We finally did it Ilooked out at the fans and saw Taesun pointing a gun at me. Then everything went black.

NOTE; should i do a sequel? if i do the chapters will be longer but i am working on another story YAY!

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FlamingMe
#1
Chapter 9: why did you leave the final with a cliffhanger??? *frustrated* please make a sequel!! thanks for the story though! it's short but i still like it. :)
LittleArmy #2
Chapter 9: Do the sequel please!!!
dreamteamace
#3
You made my heart beat fast due to the suspense chapters.. other than that, ur chapters were really interesting n short. i actually like to read short fanfics.. saves my time. XD
Shiny_sushi
#4
I don't care if your chapters are short!!It's a super story!!<br />
Except some mistakes I had a good time when I read it!
hello-nan-nie #5
this story's great and it took me like 2 hour? to finish it! :{ lol... :}
olenkiss
#6
your story made me cry... I really can't stand the idea of Taemin dying. I'll read the sequel, though. I want to know what happens with Taesun!
ukiss7
#7
yes minho tried to be nice to him. but when he was nice, he ga ask a question like that....what!!?? somethings rong with him...minho's not like that...<br />
when minho got the txt from key and ran home, and he saw his hyungs tied and gagged, and taesun was loading the gun... and then pointed it to onew's head...i quickly covered my mouth and eyes.... <br />
it actually took me a while to read on.. my heart went to racing.....<br />
omo just like taemin said u have to make a decision, and if u make the rong one...he wont like the results....<br />
was that the wrong choice he made..??? was that wat taemin ment...???<br />
but....whoo called the police????? <br />
wait...wat he's goin BACK!!!! woah....im just as shocked as all of you...<br />
omg omg he shot him.....i cant believe this...<br />
YES YES YYYYYYYEEEEESSSSSS U SHOULD REALLY DO A SEQUEL.....<br />
but all together...i really loved ur story...it was really unbelievable as u can see, i said that alot lol but i mean woah...and i was shocked.... fantastic....great story....<br />
but no really do a SEQUEL... ^-^hwaiting<3<3...
ukiss7
#8
omo they gave him a nickname....u no i thought they wanned sunny from SNSD to go walking with minho when his hyungs mentioned it... i didnt get it until they were in the hospital and minho said "yes sunnie im ok" im like oooohhhhh.....their talking bout taesun...<br />
i dont know how or y but i just did...lol<br />
i really did just catch on very slowly that time....oh wow...<br />
ok i got carried away..<br />
countinuing on....
ukiss7
#9
aniyo key.....he did not catch onew's sangtae...<br />
oooo yea he's good...<br />
neh. i see that now taeminnie.....that ur brother is messed up in the head...<br />
but if u said befriend him..i think ur best option minho is to become friends with him.... neh minho-ah fighting...<br />
ewww tae's finger is in his nose....
ukiss7
#10
komawo key, u didnt know, but from pouring the drinks down the drain...<br />
BWOH!!!!! omfg no he did not just say that....better yet he did not just do that...<br />
just because u came in 2nd, u decided to take the money so you could be on top....what.....?????????<br />
what kind of a damn brother are you....<br />
minho i wish u would have never said that u were gona tell the others and just went to them and told....<br />
MINHO-AH......plz b ok....ooo i hope someone saw him get pushed...taesun,,u are goin down.....<br />
waaaa i dont want to go to the next chapter.....pouts