Bad news

You look exactly like him

Minho's POV

     Today was a usual morning Key hyung was cooking breakfast, and Onew hyung was fighting with jonghyun hyung for the t.v remote, but Taemin wasen't out of our shared room. Curiosity came the best of me and I went to knock on the door."Taeminnie! Open Up". I waited but, I didn't here any movment inside the room. I went to get the spare key on the key holder that has Key hyungs picture on it as one of  Onew hyungs gag.

      Unlocking the door I saw Taemin sleeping peacefully but something was wrong he was pale,cold, and his chest was rising up and down slowly."HYUNGS!" I yelled. They came running into the room once they saw Taemin they knew something was wrong. Key tried to shake him awake but he wouldnt budge. Jonghyun scooped him up in his arms and took him to Onew's car.

                                                                                          -HOSPITAL-

      All of us were worried Onew hyung was talking to Manager hyung on his cell phone, Key hyung was pacing back and forth, and Jonghyun hyung was trying to calm him down.The doctor came out of Taemin's hospital room and i could tell the news wasen't good.

Onew's POV

       The doctor finally came out. But he looked as if he was hesitant to tell us what was wrong with our maknae."Well I dont know how to tell you this but, he dosent have much time" the doctor  had tried to tell us as nicely as he could."But, whats wrong with our maknae!" Key yelled."You guysdont know? Tamien was diagnosed with brain cancer not to long ago" he said shocked as why we didn't know.

        We all entered the hospital. Taemin was sitting up on his hospital bed and was writing what looked like a note. He was pale and had IV needles sticking out of his arms but, worst of all was seeing the heart moniter knowing one day it wont be beeping. He was wearing pink striped sweats and a white v-neck."Hi hyungs!" he greeted us as if nothing was wrong."Taemin how can you just sit there and greet us happily when you dying!" I yelled which was suprising espaically to our maknae. You were to yell at him you better be ready to deal with us, Super Junior hyungs, and SNSD noonas that's how much he's loved and it reminded me how much he would be missed.

  

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FlamingMe #1
Chapter 9: why did you leave the final with a cliffhanger??? *frustrated* please make a sequel!! thanks for the story though! it's short but i still like it. :)
LittleArmy #2
Chapter 9: Do the sequel please!!!
dreamteamace #3
You made my heart beat fast due to the suspense chapters.. other than that, ur chapters were really interesting n short. i actually like to read short fanfics.. saves my time. XD
Shiny_sushi #4
I don't care if your chapters are short!!It's a super story!!<br />
Except some mistakes I had a good time when I read it!
hello-nan-nie #5
this story's great and it took me like 2 hour? to finish it! :{ lol... :}
olenkiss #6
your story made me cry... I really can't stand the idea of Taemin dying. I'll read the sequel, though. I want to know what happens with Taesun!
ukiss7 #7
yes minho tried to be nice to him. but when he was nice, he ga ask a question like that....what!!?? somethings rong with him...minho's not like that...<br />
when minho got the txt from key and ran home, and he saw his hyungs tied and gagged, and taesun was loading the gun... and then pointed it to onew's head...i quickly covered my mouth and eyes.... <br />
it actually took me a while to read on.. my heart went to racing.....<br />
omo just like taemin said u have to make a decision, and if u make the rong one...he wont like the results....<br />
was that the wrong choice he made..??? was that wat taemin ment...???<br />
but....whoo called the police????? <br />
wait...wat he's goin BACK!!!! woah....im just as shocked as all of you...<br />
omg omg he shot him.....i cant believe this...<br />
YES YES YYYYYYYEEEEESSSSSS U SHOULD REALLY DO A SEQUEL.....<br />
but all together...i really loved ur story...it was really unbelievable as u can see, i said that alot lol but i mean woah...and i was shocked.... fantastic....great story....<br />
but no really do a SEQUEL... ^-^hwaiting<3<3...
ukiss7 #8
omo they gave him a nickname....u no i thought they wanned sunny from SNSD to go walking with minho when his hyungs mentioned it... i didnt get it until they were in the hospital and minho said "yes sunnie im ok" im like oooohhhhh.....their talking bout taesun...<br />
i dont know how or y but i just did...lol<br />
i really did just catch on very slowly that time....oh wow...<br />
ok i got carried away..<br />
countinuing on....
ukiss7 #9
aniyo key.....he did not catch onew's sangtae...<br />
oooo yea he's good...<br />
neh. i see that now taeminnie.....that ur brother is messed up in the head...<br />
but if u said befriend him..i think ur best option minho is to become friends with him.... neh minho-ah fighting...<br />
ewww tae's finger is in his nose....
ukiss7 #10
komawo key, u didnt know, but from pouring the drinks down the drain...<br />
BWOH!!!!! omfg no he did not just say that....better yet he did not just do that...<br />
just because u came in 2nd, u decided to take the money so you could be on top....what.....?????????<br />
what kind of a damn brother are you....<br />
minho i wish u would have never said that u were gona tell the others and just went to them and told....<br />
MINHO-AH......plz b ok....ooo i hope someone saw him get pushed...taesun,,u are goin down.....<br />
waaaa i dont want to go to the next chapter.....pouts
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