Texting God

You look exactly like him

Minho's POV

     I hate him! I won't look at him, talk to him, or speak about him! Everywhere I go its Taesun this and Taesun that. Dont they see he's trying to replace Taemin? Well he wont get to me. Taemin is the maknae of the group not him.

     "Minho hyung! Why are you beeing so mean to Taesun?". I looked at him confused. He must've cut his hair to make him look like Taemin."Stop!Ok Taesun I now its you!"."No Minho hyung its meit really is". I looked in his eyes and new it really was Taemin."Minho look im here for a mission.You have to accept Taesun"he explaained."What?No". Taemin's cellphone vibrated as he got a text."Who are you talking to" I asked."Oh its God. He wanted me to pick up some milk when im done here". Ilooked at him confeused."Its complicated.So are you going to accept him?""No" I said.

       "Ok but, your gonna have to make a choice and if you make the wrong one you wont like the results" he explained."Ok. Taemin i miss you.Come back we all do" I pleaded."Sorry i cant i have to go God just tweeted he was gonna steal all my candy". With that he was gone.

          I walked out of the room and saw Taesun sitting on the balcony of our dorm. I sneaked behind him, thinking how i could easily push him off the ledge of our 5 story apartment.

NOTE;yay i updated twice! Ilove SHINee's song wowowow

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FlamingMe #1
Chapter 9: why did you leave the final with a cliffhanger??? *frustrated* please make a sequel!! thanks for the story though! it's short but i still like it. :)
LittleArmy #2
Chapter 9: Do the sequel please!!!
dreamteamace #3
You made my heart beat fast due to the suspense chapters.. other than that, ur chapters were really interesting n short. i actually like to read short fanfics.. saves my time. XD
Shiny_sushi #4
I don't care if your chapters are short!!It's a super story!!<br />
Except some mistakes I had a good time when I read it!
hello-nan-nie #5
this story's great and it took me like 2 hour? to finish it! :{ lol... :}
olenkiss #6
your story made me cry... I really can't stand the idea of Taemin dying. I'll read the sequel, though. I want to know what happens with Taesun!
ukiss7 #7
yes minho tried to be nice to him. but when he was nice, he ga ask a question like that....what!!?? somethings rong with him...minho's not like that...<br />
when minho got the txt from key and ran home, and he saw his hyungs tied and gagged, and taesun was loading the gun... and then pointed it to onew's head...i quickly covered my mouth and eyes.... <br />
it actually took me a while to read on.. my heart went to racing.....<br />
omo just like taemin said u have to make a decision, and if u make the rong one...he wont like the results....<br />
was that the wrong choice he made..??? was that wat taemin ment...???<br />
but....whoo called the police????? <br />
wait...wat he's goin BACK!!!! woah....im just as shocked as all of you...<br />
omg omg he shot him.....i cant believe this...<br />
YES YES YYYYYYYEEEEESSSSSS U SHOULD REALLY DO A SEQUEL.....<br />
but all together...i really loved ur story...it was really unbelievable as u can see, i said that alot lol but i mean woah...and i was shocked.... fantastic....great story....<br />
but no really do a SEQUEL... ^-^hwaiting<3<3...
ukiss7 #8
omo they gave him a nickname....u no i thought they wanned sunny from SNSD to go walking with minho when his hyungs mentioned it... i didnt get it until they were in the hospital and minho said "yes sunnie im ok" im like oooohhhhh.....their talking bout taesun...<br />
i dont know how or y but i just did...lol<br />
i really did just catch on very slowly that time....oh wow...<br />
ok i got carried away..<br />
countinuing on....
ukiss7 #9
aniyo key.....he did not catch onew's sangtae...<br />
oooo yea he's good...<br />
neh. i see that now taeminnie.....that ur brother is messed up in the head...<br />
but if u said befriend him..i think ur best option minho is to become friends with him.... neh minho-ah fighting...<br />
ewww tae's finger is in his nose....
ukiss7 #10
komawo key, u didnt know, but from pouring the drinks down the drain...<br />
BWOH!!!!! omfg no he did not just say that....better yet he did not just do that...<br />
just because u came in 2nd, u decided to take the money so you could be on top....what.....?????????<br />
what kind of a damn brother are you....<br />
minho i wish u would have never said that u were gona tell the others and just went to them and told....<br />
MINHO-AH......plz b ok....ooo i hope someone saw him get pushed...taesun,,u are goin down.....<br />
waaaa i dont want to go to the next chapter.....pouts
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