Chapter 14: Haha cute! Chanyeol definitely doesn't have to do much to make a girl's heart pitter patter wildly ^_~ And lol the two are still in the discovery stage of their feelings. Baekhyun's going to have so much fun with that :D
Good job with 3rd person! And a Happy Early New Year to you too!
Chapter 14: I actually really like third person because like you said, it lets you get insight into all of the characters without having to do so many POV changes that in my opinion, confuse the reader. I wouldn't mind if you changed :)
Chapter 13: First of all, thanks for starting new paragraphs when a different person talks! It really helped make reading easier :)
Now on to story comments...
Ohmygosh, Chanyeol you big flirt! "Who's to say that I didn't enjoy that little moment?" Lol, you're such a skinship monster! But I'm sure no girl would actually have a problem with that ^_~
And I'm so glad that Soojin finally called him and they're hanging out...well doing homework...but that's how it starts before the two start having their moments together XD
I'm also looking forward to how Kai will react when he realizes the growing relationship between Soojin and Chanyeol :D
Chapter 12: I actually think
Eumin/EunMi (me) deserves to date
OH SEHUN ♥ XD -no offense- OKAY??
I just cant take baekhyun and chanyeol :(
They are my bias OH, scratch that! I cant
even choose one. XDD but I love the three.
Im afraid I might destroy the BAEKYEOL couple.
so let me take Sehun. XDDD♥
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